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7/24/2025, Three Options in 1 Contest, Constance La France

Sometimes, you leave and go back to your childhood home. It is like returning to Kansas from Oz. I never realized how beautiful it is, where I grew up. Both, "Legend of Sleepy Hollow" and  "Rip Van Winkle" were written by Washington Irving. He wrote of the Catskills (-kills refers to water, like other places Peekskill and Kaaterskill). Rip Van Winkle fell asleep for 20 years and in the Sleepy Hollow story, there is a headless horseman lobbing off heads. Irving was a great storyteller. 

Idyllic

Hudson Valley, New York …Lord of Rings’ shire.
A vineyard, filled with rich and famous names.

I’m pleased to be impressed by the artists,
as they surrender idyllic charm with paint.

Emerald green; delicious apple bites,
wind chimes through the pines, mountains of Catskill.

The headless horseman of Sleepy Hollow -
to drink, deep, the forests of Van Winkle.

Freedom fostered in cobblestone and -kills.
Small town parades, fireworks at Vanderbilt’s.

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Date: 8/1/2025 4:06:00 PM
Fabulous Kim. Sounds lovely. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/1/2025 7:22:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my Three Options in I contest, and info, and your words are well done, blessings ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2025 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, and for inspiring us with your contests!
Date: 7/29/2025 8:41:00 PM
Woah, awesome!!! Love this. It's so great to read you again! :) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2025 8:49:00 AM
And I appreciate you so!
Date: 7/28/2025 8:12:00 PM
Back to your lovely poem with Congratulations on your great win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa!
Date: 7/28/2025 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear lovely Kim :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 7/28/2025 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. Great notes... Have a blessed day with your win.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 7/26/2025 3:10:00 PM
Dear Kim, you penned a gorgeous poem with memories of your childhood home. Very interestingly I picked the same topic and wrote about the country I was born.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2025 3:23:00 PM
Awesome! Thank you!
Date: 7/25/2025 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful poetry! Enjoyed the idyllic beauty of the Hudson valley and the paintings of artists in that area.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2025 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 7/25/2025 11:40:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. I've never been there, but Washington Irving's stories captured my imagination, and charmed me. A few months ago I checked out a book of his short stories, and left it on top of my car, and lost it, and paid the library $17 (TMI), but anyway, very nice - loved your depiction. Maybe I live there in another life.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2025 12:42:00 PM
Wow, that’s crazy, David! I used to work at the library as a part time tech. After retiring, I accidentally pushed a book toward a wet tea bag. They were kind enough just to charge me for restocking. I am always so careful! Thank you! Perhaps you will try again…lol
Date: 7/25/2025 5:30:00 AM
I have written a poem on the subject but not yet posted it. Ten lines seem so short. Yet you wrote a pleasant entry for the contest. Wishing you the best of luck. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2025 7:14:00 AM
Looking forward to reading it!
Date: 7/24/2025 7:28:00 PM
I am almost sure that the recollection is much better than the lived reality. And that's ok...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2025 7:16:00 AM
When you vacation you get more out of a place. My parents were not explorers. :)
Date: 7/24/2025 5:15:00 PM
a lovely read, truly. a great contest entry. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2025 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! We will see!
Date: 7/24/2025 3:47:00 PM
It truly must be idyllic. I love those stores by Washington Irving. Great little poem, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2025 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
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