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Idyllic-Brevette

mountains
k i s s
sky
clouds
d e v o u r
sun
Date: 10/29/2020 Submitted for: IN Just A Few Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Second Place

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Date: 11/18/2020 7:03:00 PM
Oh, Ani, I adore and admire the dramatic beauty your precious pen has captured in your superb brevity. Breathtaking and passionate imagery, my dear friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest.. ~Susa
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/19/2020 2:34:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for your visit and these sweet words dear friend. Have a sweet blessed day. Love and hugs :)
Date: 11/1/2020 4:03:00 PM
A 'natural' for the winner's circle, Ani. Congrats to you. And, belatedly, Welcome to Poetry Soup! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/1/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thank you for the visit, comment and the warm welcome Gershon!!.. Have a great day.. :)
Date: 11/1/2020 7:31:00 AM
Congrats. This was one of the best!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/1/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and comment Andrea.. Have a great day.. Hugs... :)
Date: 10/31/2020 11:38:00 PM
Your natural beauty 'shines' in this short poem, Ani. Congratulations on your win ~ John
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Date: 11/1/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment John.. Have a cheerful day.. :)
Date: 10/31/2020 10:44:00 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve for the visit and comment.. Love and hugs.. :)
Date: 10/31/2020 9:28:00 PM
Nice Anitha....the first part similar to my poem :)
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol... Is it? Let me check... :)
Date: 10/31/2020 3:18:00 PM
beautiful Anitha:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan... Hugs... ~:)
Date: 10/31/2020 12:52:00 PM
Very nicely done Anitha, Congrats on your win..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/31/2020 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph May.. The contest was interesting.. :)
Date: 10/31/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hi Anitha, In just a few words, your imagery is spot on. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis. You too have a wonderful day.. :)
Date: 10/31/2020 11:39:00 AM
Love this Anitha. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/31/2020 11:22:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Linda!! Love and hugs.. :)
Date: 10/31/2020 11:34:00 AM
- A great poem in a few words ... congratulations on your win, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/31/2020 11:23:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne!! Love and hugs.. :)
Date: 10/30/2020 8:53:00 AM
wow, NOw THAT is how to do a brevette!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/30/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea... feeling good learning new forms of poetry... -hugs.. Gud night.. :)
Date: 10/29/2020 6:41:00 AM
Too good. Sure winner. All the best. Hope you are fine and all is well at home. Have a great day ahead. Regards Rama
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/29/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Rama.. All good here dear. Hope u are fine too.. Hugs.. :)
Date: 10/29/2020 6:01:00 AM
So vivid; so creative, Anitha!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/29/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Newton Arach.. :)