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You lie there frail and fractal A shell battered against the shore Polished and broken Calm colors cloak extravagant design Home to lost crabs Who outgrow and abandon Treasure to tourists and salesmen Who display and forget You twirl and contort your bold lines to please One day you may break Become a weapon A thousand particles of sand

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Date: 9/7/2009 10:55:00 AM
This is a beautiful and powerful metaphor. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 8/26/2009 4:08:00 PM
Interesting concept put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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