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I'D Love To Give You Colors

Another quiet night, So dark and yet so white, I'd love to write you a song, Just wouldn't seem quite right. I lay and start to think, So close and on the brink, I'd love to see your smile, So yellow with a splash of pink. Cuz' yesterday's blue has disappeared, And today's red is still revered, I'd love to paint you in the sun, If only the clouds had cleared. But all the gray in the world, Doesn't compare to your sword, I'd love to cut you out, Paste you on my old clip board. So deep and so in love, Too black to be a dove, I'd love to see you fly, Feel you free from up above. If only you knew your white, Oh what a beautiful sight, I'd love to kiss you on the cheek, Say sleep with angels, and good night. Date Written: September 23, 2015

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Date: 1/29/2016 5:33:00 AM
Very well penned, congratulations on your WIN......
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Archana *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 11:52:00 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this colourful write Laura..
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma once again *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 5:42:00 PM
very beautifully penned LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 6:13:00 PM
Thank you lady :)-luloo
Date: 1/28/2016 11:52:00 AM
A well written and colorful poem, my pen friend. I enjoyed this read. Congratulations!.....Sharon : )
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/28/2016 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Sharon:)
Date: 10/4/2015 12:01:00 AM
Wonderful one to read...wow...such a jewel this poem is! :D Enjoyed reading it to the max!! (X Have a blessed day! - JWME PS: My real name is David (but call me Dave for short)
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 10/4/2015 12:01:00 AM
You could come over and read more from me and comment!

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