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Ice Serendipity

Even the strongest of ice Can crack and shatter It’s only as strong As the frozen matter Water exists rigid Porous and slippery In great formation With serendipity The ice forms on branches Where it comes and cracks Bending the limbs down Making them cling with tracks A wall is formed Right before my eyes Whatever water does Frozen ice denies Russell Sivey

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/21/2014 3:17:00 PM

there is something about the frost (the mystery, the setting, etc.) that lends it to abstract thoughts...I enjoyed this splendid write, Russell... more!.. huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/20/2014 10:40:00 PM

It is so good to see you back and thank you for stopping by my work..A great idea for a poem..well done. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2014 2:03:00 PM

I don't know much about ice. but it seems you have written a very clever one on water and ice!! Merry christmas, Russell. good seeing you back.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/20/2014 4:59:00 AM

absolutely stunning Russell into faves and a 7 - have read this through 3 times now its such a clever write:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/20/2014 4:11:00 AM

Your poem shows you are an expert on ice formation and behavior! Your verse beautifully glides on paper, captivating the reader! Excellent piece my friend, Russell!