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Ice Rain

a walk in ice rain trillions of crunching beads cushion my feet ~*~ 01/26/11-Wed

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 1:20:00 PM

wow,I LOVE this. Congrats for your win with PD.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/19/2011 12:00:00 PM

My congrats to you, Annalise : )

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/19/2011 10:38:00 AM

Beautiful Annalise, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;) lfde Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 5:11:00 AM

Congratulations Annalise on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2011 7:51:00 PM

Congrats Annalise ..on this wonderful win.. a great piece from a great poetess who is very missed luv..

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/5/2011 8:39:00 PM

I've been chopping for eight hours. Nicely written, but not my favorite weather. Vince

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/2/2011 6:27:00 PM

I kniow the feeling since it has been like that here in New York for the past few days. Please let me know whta you think of my poem - "Another Day here at BMCC. Yours Matthew Anish

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/2/2011 10:54:00 AM

If this is in a contest...good luck in it. ...JAM

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/2/2011 10:53:00 AM

I can see this happening!!! Very nice...Jimmy

Constance La France

Date: 2/1/2011 7:41:00 AM

Very visual and divine, I love it and I sent you a soupy mail~~

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/31/2011 4:35:00 PM

cool Haiku, Annalise. A True one according to the book! Last line stands alone compared to the first two yet is related to theme.1st line ice ---2cd crunch ----3rd cushion. Really cool. That's hard to do for me. nice job into my favs,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2011 1:10:00 PM

So well described, Annalise. I'd love to walk over the crunching beads with you. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/30/2011 8:49:00 AM

Yes, Annalise, enjoyed this Haiku too! We luckily had no ice rain here, but underneath the snow there is ice on the sidewalks so we have to walk very carefully!...All the best!...Gert

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/29/2011 6:44:00 AM

Sounds like my stormy Ny month... very nice images in this piece...luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2011 4:06:00 PM

this is really cool Do you mean crunching in line two?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2011 4:52:00 PM

And looking outside my door tonight is exactly every word u have penned so beautifully Annalise.. this ice rain is much prettier to read than to walk on luv.. good luck in the contest my friend...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/26/2011 3:36:00 PM

Wonderful images you have created in this write, Annalise

Stacey Watts

Date: 1/26/2011 3:30:00 PM

This is very descriptive and beautiful.