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Ice Rain

a walk in ice rain
                        
                       trillions of crunching beads
                                     
                                               cushion my feet

                                                             ~*~





01/26/11-Wed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/23/2011 1:20:00 PM
wow,I LOVE this. Congrats for your win with PD.
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:00:00 PM
My congrats to you, Annalise : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful Annalise, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations Annalise on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:51:00 PM
Congrats Annalise ..on this wonderful win.. a great piece from a great poetess who is very missed luv..
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Date: 2/5/2011 8:39:00 PM
I've been chopping for eight hours. Nicely written, but not my favorite weather. Vince
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:27:00 PM
I kniow the feeling since it has been like that here in New York for the past few days. Please let me know whta you think of my poem - "Another Day here at BMCC. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:54:00 AM
If this is in a contest...good luck in it. ...JAM
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:53:00 AM
I can see this happening!!! Very nice...Jimmy
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:41:00 AM
Very visual and divine, I love it and I sent you a soupy mail~~
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Date: 1/31/2011 4:35:00 PM
cool Haiku, Annalise. A True one according to the book! Last line stands alone compared to the first two yet is related to theme.1st line ice ---2cd crunch ----3rd cushion. Really cool. That's hard to do for me. nice job into my favs,
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:10:00 PM
So well described, Annalise. I'd love to walk over the crunching beads with you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:49:00 AM
Yes, Annalise, enjoyed this Haiku too! We luckily had no ice rain here, but underneath the snow there is ice on the sidewalks so we have to walk very carefully!...All the best!...Gert
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Date: 1/29/2011 6:44:00 AM
Sounds like my stormy Ny month... very nice images in this piece...luv Michael
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Date: 1/28/2011 4:06:00 PM
this is really cool Do you mean crunching in line two?
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:52:00 PM
And looking outside my door tonight is exactly every word u have penned so beautifully Annalise.. this ice rain is much prettier to read than to walk on luv.. good luck in the contest my friend...
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Date: 1/26/2011 3:36:00 PM
Wonderful images you have created in this write, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2011 3:30:00 PM
This is very descriptive and beautiful.
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