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Ice Crystals

luminescent brilliant crystal clusters... encrusted pathways ~*~ Note: Observered during mini ice storm last night

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Deb Radke

Date: 1/23/2011 6:56:00 AM

Hi Annalise -- Oh my. I have just posted a haiku called 'luminous lace' written after looking at the sunlight coming through my frosted windows. We have had below zero degree temps here for the last week. It appears we are both experiencing nature's freezing touch. Very good haiku. I love your middle line. Love, Deb

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 7:03:00 AM

Hi Annalise, well observed and nice imagery! Enjoyed the read. Today we had snowfall again but temperatures are not very low! Thank you for your friendly comments! Have a great day!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 6:30:00 AM

A vision of loveliness Annalise in your words today.. a splendid Haiku .. good luck in the contest.. the imagery is powerful.... my friend..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 4:32:00 AM

I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Annalise. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2011 3:15:00 AM

This is very "enchanting and lovely" there is nothing more beautiful than a world "encrusted" in ice, so magical~~

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/18/2011 9:42:00 PM

Beautiful...PB....JAM

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2011 7:06:00 PM

Beautiful! Simply - Beautiful!, Audrey. Lainie

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/18/2011 5:53:00 PM

Bet is was beautiful to see, ....as long as one does not have to go out and endure the cold !! :) Lovely!!

Daver Austin

Date: 1/18/2011 3:12:00 PM

Beautiful, and I recall how the trees were all coated with ice - a regular fairy land. Enjoyed mucho. Love, Dave

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2011 2:19:00 PM

What a vision you describe, Annalise! I would have loved to walk along those "encrusted pathways" with you after the storm to hear the ice crystals crunching beneath our feet. Magnificent haiku! Love, Carolyn

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/18/2011 1:49:00 PM

really lovely sounding for a storm! very descriptive..love,deb