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Ice Cream

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Ice Cream

''Like Ice Cream''

Having ice cream with you, 
Brightens the entire portrait in my youth.
Like catnip for a cat 
-- the     Reese's    fun never stops!
Like monkeys in a zoo, above a tasty sherbet treetop.

Ice Cream with you!
How sweet,  the imagery of 31 different treats 
Cold butter and  salty Placid water, with the works 
Amaretto peaches, and slushy sauce  --- twerk
Dandelion haven- above a marshmallow rocky road
Fireflies flicker around the fresh Lemon Drop Sky
A delightful sundae breeze on the crest of my tongue 
 Soft frozen chocolate dessert, nothing can go amiss 
 
Ice Cream with You!
So many to choose from, 
Savor the delicious flavor 
---of Butterscotch homemade rum

There's no other place I'd rather be
Lost Inside this forever hazel mint joy scenery 
The ultimate indulgence in one icy bite
A cream coconut cherry delight 
-served on the side with apple pie
In a cup, on a cone, my vanilla waffle boy 
Everything-- about-- you-- roams free 
like tubs of ice cream dreams

Listen to the sound of soft sprinkles cinnamon
The happy feeling that melts when you're around
I'm packing a giant scoop of Ice Cream from your heart

Adoring and Embracing Life
Every time you say the words
...I love you...

:)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 7/2/2016 9:31:00 PM
And I always will Love Al
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:15:00 AM
I very much liked this. "The happy feeling that melts when you're around." Nice.
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Date: 9/7/2014 5:39:00 PM
and another one and...
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Date: 8/13/2014 3:56:00 AM
Drips off the tongue. Another enjoyable read.
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:50:00 PM
Looking over your ice creams again. You have some REALLY good ones, PD.
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Date: 7/23/2014 11:59:00 AM
Fart #2:. I mean...(partial DUECE) -when finished breaking of the piece, I may glance at it quickly, then I clean up my paper and move on. I do not edit or read the poems... just as I do not sit and stare at my shit, and marvel at it's glory or wonderful scent. When I hurt, the more magnificent the piece of shit is...ALso,there are several more parallels with this simile. I'm very confident you could think of them...YOU are one creative girl! Please Grab that pen and get UnConstipated! DSRTYR!
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Date: 7/23/2014 12:00:00 PM
sry so long-winded! pew-wee:)
Date: 7/23/2014 11:51:00 AM
holy fuK! this is one COLD shot with HoT topping :"Having ice cream with you. Relives the entire portrait in my youth". Descriptive!~the first line is sWeet as it gets...7fave. (AND that is a short list of faves) OK...Now for the "Loaded" :) question...about taking a dump. All day my senses digest what's around, going on, emotions etc. etc...I NEVER plan any poems. Never think, and Bam an urge. much like shitting. The more "Food" taken in, the more Magnificent the dump,
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Date: 6/28/2014 12:34:00 PM
Just want to say hi, pd! Sorry, it's been quite some time since I read your poems, I hope to read them soon, just so sleepy right now....
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Date: 6/21/2014 7:58:00 AM
Awesome one....I really enjoyed your this poem...I found it quite funny...and just went in the dreams of Ice-cream..!!!
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Date: 6/6/2014 9:20:00 PM
My name is Ayesha Karim and in primary school a boy used to tease me, he would call me Ice Cream. I love Ice Cream as long as it is french vanilla or strawberry.
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Date: 5/10/2014 9:47:00 AM
Soft frozen chocolate dessert, nothing can go wrong....BANG ON! Respect.
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Date: 5/10/2014 9:46:00 AM
Soft frozen chocolate dessert, nothing can go wrong....BANG ON! Respect.
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Date: 4/24/2014 8:52:00 AM
Lovely poem Linda.....the mixture of colors and tastes of love...al there dying to be shared....taking and giving :) // paul
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Date: 4/23/2014 8:47:00 AM
Love me some ice cream and love the way you compare it to love yummy :) Nice work Linda
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Date: 4/20/2014 8:41:00 PM
Enjoyed this creative ice cream social very much. Like your writing!
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Date: 4/15/2014 5:57:00 PM
I loved your poem. It was creative and I bet a very fun write. Not to mention it made me crave some ice cream. Just sopped by to check out some of your poetry. Until we write again Karen
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:59:00 PM
PD This is such a creative and fun write. Full of charm and love. Thank you for the nice comment on my Wasted Life poem.
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Date: 3/30/2014 6:47:00 PM
When Everything Is New, Beautiful Linda, Tis Easy To Imagine Those Magical Words Being Spoken, Ten Thousand Times, Ten Thousand Times, Unto Your Beauty, Unto Yourself...'I Love You'...This Is Absolutely Amazing Somewhat Intense And Splendidly Refreshing In Both Image As, Creativity! Truth, You Are Her Poetry's Thirty-One Flavours Unique Is This, The Beauty Of She....Needless To Say Once More, Once Again, A Magnificent Jewel Amid Her Crown, In Faves...Love, Jeremy
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Date: 3/25/2014 2:30:00 PM
I'm sure I commented before Linda, but It was just too good not to read again. It was a wonderful treat!, Thank you for you nice comments and take care, God Bless!
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Date: 3/25/2014 10:50:00 AM
I enjoyed the alliteration and fun in this poem. Great elements = great poem. Good day and God bless. :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 11:47:00 AM
nice poem, Ice cream is good yum!!!!!
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:14:00 PM
A wonderful poem; your imagery has left me craving ice cream in the middle of winter.
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Date: 2/17/2014 11:04:00 AM
OH what a dirty mind I have about "Ice Cream"!!!-Hahahahahahaha...Mmmmmmm, LOL Great Write, I really enjoyed read this and thinking all the "deliciously devilish" thoughts of making love atop all the many flavors of Ice Cream with you, My "Dairy Queen"!...Hahahahahahahaha//xoxoxo//Sinclair
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:06:00 PM
hi sweetheart sista Linda..thank you so much for the nice ICE CREAM :) Enjoyed so much :) hope everything is well :) Lov and peace :) Sk
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Date: 1/22/2014 12:39:00 PM
Very imaginative and colorful write.
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