Ice Blue Skies

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Migrating southward before Autumn dies; flocks of geese split the air with honking cries. And snow clouds dapple Winter's ice-blue skies; as winds kiss the trees with audible sighs. Dawn's first light ignites an ice-cold sunrise; long-gone are the songbirds and butterflies. Yet, some creatures have learned to improvise, turning food into fat, they winterize. Hibernating bears must bulk up their size, not gorging in the Fall would be unwise. A long Winter could lead to their demise should the need to wake up early arise. Inclement weather tends to brutalize; for nature doesn't react well to surprise. Fighting starvation and all it implies; some species evolved to cannibalize.

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Date: 1/5/2023 6:33:00 AM
This is a splendid example of monorhyme, Emile. A feat successfully accomplished for a winning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/5/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Lin, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2023 8:39:00 PM
Emile, your Ice Blue Skies is a poetic "Marty Stouffer's Wild America" in unforced monorhyme. I love "as winds kiss the trees with audible sighs." And so true your last stanza, "Inclement weather patterns brutalize, ~ for nature doesn't react well to surprise." We certainly are experiencing that right now. Congratulations on your win on Mile 23 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 24 has already started.
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Date: 1/5/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, you honor my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/4/2023 6:24:00 PM
Dear Emile, your enchanting pen portrays Nature's winter season so beautifully in all her glory and hardship. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/5/2023 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/30/2020 5:37:00 AM
I knew this one would be a high ranking poem! And so glad it is!
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Date: 1/30/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/21/2020 11:36:00 AM
A smooth read through nature and its many realities. Enjoyed this read very much Emile; congrats on the win;-)
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Date: 1/21/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Keith, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/21/2020 11:26:00 AM
This is great Emile, congrats on your win and high ranking on best poems. Usually mono rhymes seem forced but this one doesn't, it's free flowing well metered!
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Date: 1/21/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thanks so much John, you know how to create a smile my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/18/2020 2:42:00 AM
Wow Emile, this monorhyme is so stunning and wonderful! I see why it won First Place. Congratulations on your deserving win! Please share it at PFT if you have time. I loved it and am Faving it! xxoo
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Date: 1/18/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/15/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thanks for this intriguing gem, well-penned Emile, and thank you for your participation and understanding at hosting a standard for the first time my friend, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk
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Date: 1/15/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thank you William, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/8/2020 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/8/2020 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/2/2020 3:58:00 PM
Your meter is dynamic, and your rhymes emphatically wonderful, my friend. Happy New Year, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/3/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Caren, have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/2/2020 2:26:00 PM
Excellent Monorhyme Emile :)
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Date: 1/2/2020 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/2/2020 1:04:00 PM
Such fabulous seasonal imagery in your super monorhyme, good luck in the contest and happy new year Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2020 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Jan, and a very Happy New year to you my friend, Emile.
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