Ice Blue Skies

Migrating southward, before Autumn dies; flocks of geese split the air with honking cries. And snow clouds dapple Winter's ice-blue skies, as winds kiss the trees with audible sighs. Dawn's first light ignites an ice-cold sunrise; long-gone are the songbirds and butterflies. Yet, some creatures have learned to improvise, turning food into fat, they winterize. Hibernating bears must bulk up their size, not gorging in the Fall, would be unwise. A long Winter could lead to their demise, should the need to wake up early arise. Inclement weather tends to brutalize; for nature doesn't react well to surprise. Fighting starvation and all it implies, some species evolved to cannibalize.
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Lane Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 6:33 AM
This is a splendid example of monorhyme, Emile. A feat successfully accomplished for a winning poem. Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Thanks, Lin, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Toney Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 8:39 PM
Emile, your Ice Blue Skies is a poetic "Marty Stouffer's Wild America" in unforced monorhyme. I love "as winds kiss the trees with audible sighs." And so true your last stanza, "Inclement weather patterns brutalize, ~ for nature doesn't react well to surprise." We certainly are experiencing that right now. Congratulations on your win on Mile 23 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 24 has already started.
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Thanks, Mark, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, you honor my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Dear Emile, your enchanting pen portrays Nature's winter season so beautifully in all her glory and hardship. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thanks, Susan, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 5:37 AM
I knew this one would be a high ranking poem! And so glad it is!
Pinet Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate of your support my friend, Emile.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:36 AM
A smooth read through nature and its many realities. Enjoyed this read very much Emile; congrats on the win;-)
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Thanks Keith, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:26 AM
This is great Emile, congrats on your win and high ranking on best poems. Usually mono rhymes seem forced but this one doesn't, it's free flowing well metered!
Pinet Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Thanks so much John, you know how to create a smile my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:42 AM
Wow Emile, this monorhyme is so stunning and wonderful! I see why it won First Place. Congratulations on your deserving win! Please share it at PFT if you have time. I loved it and am Faving it! xxoo
Pinet Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thanks for this intriguing gem, well-penned Emile, and thank you for your participation and understanding at hosting a standard for the first time my friend, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk
Pinet Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 6:35 PM
Thank you William, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Chiri Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
Pinet Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Your meter is dynamic, and your rhymes emphatically wonderful, my friend. Happy New Year, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Caren, have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Excellent Monorhyme Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Thanks Heidi, have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Such fabulous seasonal imagery in your super monorhyme, good luck in the contest and happy new year Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Thanks Jan, and a very Happy New year to you my friend, Emile.
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