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I Write Upon Rhymes

I write Upon my computer-paper of white Telling of stories and poems of rhyme My mind sometimes will just not think It plays many a trick Talks telling many stories and what not to tell My crazy mind what do you see and know I write Upon rhymes and on things to say hello Before they put me in a padded cell Many times my words will just click Reading writes make me blink Today I got lost among all the space and time My mind has ideas that are so bright I write Upon the stories and poems of might Large like a castle or small as a dime How about roses that are pink Maybe about the sick I bet my computer and pens really spell I want my writes to be read and to glow Date Written: 1/27/2021 3 Place My Invented Form - I Write Upon Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Contest Judged: 2/14/2021

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David Kavanagh

Date: 2/15/2021 12:08:00 PM

Great writing Paula, congratulations, and fully deserved winning placement, I’ll be in the padded cell next door to you, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Great, we can pass our writes to each other. Have a blessed day..........

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/15/2021 10:11:00 AM

Hi Paula, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2021 6:57:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. It was a fun write. Have a blessed day..........

Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2021 9:25:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/16/2021 6:56:00 AM

Thank You, for writing, for your kind words and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in your contest. I had to really work on this Invented Form. It was a fun write. Have a blessed day..........................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/31/2021 6:29:00 PM

I like your invented form, Paula, and especially like your musings upon writing, poetry, and all the rest! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/1/2021 8:31:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with blessings.............

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/29/2021 5:13:00 AM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this... Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2021 10:39:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. It was a fun write. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend.............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/28/2021 12:42:00 PM

This is really really good Paula. You executed beautifully in this difficult form. All the best.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for your kind words. Glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend.............

Sand Blown

Date: 1/28/2021 9:51:00 AM

...ah!...your title binds 'all' together as a sound(ed) 'knot'.......stan sand

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2021 10:36:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for your kind words. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend.............

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/27/2021 9:05:00 PM

You write upon Rhyme so well, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2021 10:35:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend.............

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/27/2021 5:52:00 PM

A very nice poem, Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2021 10:34:00 AM

Thank You, for reading. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend.............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2021 3:34:00 PM

I like it “when words click” you have said what I am usually thinking.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/29/2021 10:32:00 AM

Thank You, for reading. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend.............