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Becca Teagan

Date: 6/8/2017 1:43:00 PM

Sadly this is what it's about, getting "even" and then suddenly, both are cheaters, and both are losers in the end. I love the reality here in your words, like a sad story unfolding before me. You're a good writer!

Darren White

Date: 6/5/2017 6:22:00 AM

Man :) That is horrible..... and good. And it's a song, isn't it? If not, it should be. But oh boy ... This part is very good: ""I'm not finished, though; we both cheated, so we're both equal, right? // We've both been leading lives, reasoning with sequences of lies // That repeat and re-arrive, by each and every night // and each day, we lie to others and ourselves just to seem brave // Good to see you back with a poem.

Deadd Accountt
Date: 6/6/2017 10:51:00 PM

Thank you bro, yeah It is more of a song hahaha I didn't even realize that until you pointed it out to me. ;)