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I Would Bring Her Home

When we got uprooted from the native place the anchoring nook for driftwood was my mother who built a deep shadow so no blazing sun I’d face, strewn pieces of life from the debris I could gather. She toiled day and night so very hard, nurtured the sapling with love and utmost care, opened a sky of hope for the tree growing in backyard, for whatever I’ve made of myself today I owe her. On the sea of life from her anchor I sailed away, wished she had made a new home with me again. Detached from abode of her heart nowhere she’d stay, to dislodge her attached mind I tried many times in vain. I should have refused to listen to her persistent plea, for I regret she met her end on the lonely track. I would bring her home to live with me, if only the hands of time I could turn back.
October 8, 2019 Contest : If only we could turn back the hands of time Sponsor : Silent One

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Date: 10/17/2019 7:30:00 AM
Congrats Subimal on a very touching write and a fine win in the contest!
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest. This very sad poem so clearly shows the hurt, pain and regret we too oft face/endure in life. A true pleasure to read such fine poetry!
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Date: 10/15/2019 2:05:00 AM
I love my Mom SO MUCH, this is heartbreaking and so poignant. God bless you with many more wins and congrats. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win Subimal :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:08:00 PM
heartbreaking, how many children can relate to this.... they always realise when it is too late.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/8/2019 6:23:00 AM
Excellent poem. Well expressed Subimal! She sounds special :)
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