I Wonder Why

I wonder why You still pry and often lie I just sigh I will not cry nor slowly die I'll just say bye 10-9-19 Alexis Y.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/9/2019 1:17:00 PM

WOW few words - powerful message dear Alexis - without looking at Bobby's message, just looked down to see who commented, we have said exactly the same in reverse, that is so awesome! Hugs and blessings, Jenny.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/9/2019 1:07:00 PM

Helllo Alexis Y. Yes I agree -it is best to say good bye. If it does not work out why stay around.? Have a nice day my friend.

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/9/2019 12:44:00 PM

Neerdowellers need not apply

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/9/2019 10:32:00 AM

Truth can be harsh in some verses of life..you said it well, Alexis.

Bobby May

Date: 10/9/2019 9:57:00 AM

Very powerful with few words my friend!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/9/2019 9:45:00 AM

A potent little poem that pops. Enjoyed! xomo