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I Wonder If You Remember

You first held my hand in rapture's own sown, green honed land. Shared time rose our laughter through layered throes of joy-spiced air. Your lips brushed mine with youth's stirred flair by a stream's calm stare and we lost focus under night's starry sky as sparks dazzled our sighs - Years haven't splayed my recall of our young sating sways in twilight rays ...

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Daniel Turner

Date: 7/9/2018 12:45:00 AM

Very steamy, CayCay. You're such a naughty girl. lol Extremely well written sweetie. I see kudos are in order. Well done!

Judge Santiago Burdon

Date: 7/7/2018 1:44:00 AM

So brief yet lasting. Epic

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2018 2:31:00 PM

NOw I am SURE that one was for a special person! Beautiful, Caycay. Which contest was it in? Congrats I see. And well deserved!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/24/2018 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well deserved win, CayCay !!! Hugs Eve ~`*

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/24/2018 12:38:00 AM

Well done, CayCay, excellent piece and very worthy of the win! Viv x

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2018 10:03:00 AM

You sent depths of past romance into this old soul with this beautiful and so finely weaved tapestry of poetic words my friend. Closing verse is inspiring and immense powerful in its light and truth.. A fav!!!

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/21/2018 4:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this well-written romantic poem, all in five lines. Amazing!

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/20/2018 4:26:00 PM

beautiful poetry, congrats on win,

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2018 1:23:00 PM

Wow, wow, WOW CayCay! This poem is so incredible! I see why it is at the top of the winner's list. It is going into my Faves my friend. It is one of your best! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2018 3:15:00 PM

Way to go, my lady. You are on a roll!!! congrats on top win.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/19/2018 11:48:00 AM

Sweetly done, well deserved win!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/18/2018 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, Cay Cay! Hugs, Carolyn

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/18/2018 8:51:00 AM

Back with congrats! Yay :) xomo!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2018 12:39:00 PM

- Top win !!! - I visit your poem CayCay, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/17/2018 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations CayCay, Tom.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/17/2018 10:27:00 AM

Lovely! Congrats on first place! ...joy-spiced air and starry skies!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/17/2018 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations CayCay on your podium write:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/17/2018 8:10:00 AM

Congrats!!! Cay Cay...lovely verse...love & light...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/17/2018 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations for your top win CayCay :)

Roy Pett

Date: 6/17/2018 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win CayCay, beautiful poetry, a joy to read. :))

Silent One

Date: 6/17/2018 6:09:00 AM

Wow... You described this beautiful moment so poetically CayCay... And only in 5 lines... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

John Gondolf

Date: 6/16/2018 1:50:00 PM

"Your lips brushed my lips in a young dare" love that line CayCay, and your whole poem as well. Nicely penned my friend. John

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2018 1:16:00 PM

So many couples fail to make it through the "passing years," but when they do, how wonderful it is to recall those first moments of attraction. A lovely poem, CayCay! Hugs, Carolyn

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/16/2018 10:48:00 AM

Oh so rich and eloquent! Stunning piece CayCay! Already a winner with me :) good luck in the contest! xomo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/16/2018 10:43:00 AM

Lovely romantic five liner CayCay, good luck. Tom