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I Wonder

I wonder if God told her How I broke down and cried I wonder if he told her How I thought he lied I wonder if she's seen My dedication and my praise Has she seen my suffering And counted up the days I wonder if she's waiting As if I was already there Smileing and not debating The eturnity I'd wish we'd share I wonder if I could win her Not by law or decree I'd want that something special Just from her to me I wonder if God hears me While my poetry prays And passes on this love For the one that it was made I wonder if forever Really does exist Then I would use forever For a love like this

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2014 1:01:00 PM
This coming with pure emotions from the heart. Yes I think she knows of the love you have for her.. love phyl
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:54:00 PM
I wrote one titled I Wonder. I was going through comments and found one from 2009 you left me on my poem Through the eyes of another. I like this one. I still always wonder. Hugs, Colleen
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Date: 7/17/2013 7:11:00 PM
thank you so much for all your comments on my poetry. You are too kind. I very much like your comments though you always brighten my day with your sweet words. You are quite talented as well and I enjoy reading your work.
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:23:00 PM
Touching words from the heart, wonderful write! Hugs
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Date: 7/9/2013 2:05:00 PM
A beautiful, thoughtful and heartfelt poem. Excellent work.
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Date: 6/28/2013 1:06:00 PM
Great work honoring April and your love of her...Sara
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Date: 6/3/2013 11:44:00 AM
Dearest John,this is in everybody's inquire. god soothes us and answer our prayers in the correct time. surely your poetry prays will be pass on to her. Thank yyou john for your comments. very much needed/ hugs /manel
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Date: 6/2/2013 12:04:00 AM
? Captivating.
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Date: 6/2/2013 12:05:00 AM
[: and didn't mean to put that question mark lol
Date: 5/30/2013 5:07:00 PM
i also wonder! And ofcourse, it exists,....forever.
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