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I Wished Upon An Autumn Moon

I wished upon an autumn moon and fell among the stars Was whisked away to somewhere good a place just where you are Along a winding riverbed below a willow tree With fireflies to light the way a path for you and me We laughed as if the world were new amazed within this scene Of lily pads and dragonflies the two of us did dream Holding hands and skipping stones the ripples came to shore Magically they disappeared as we called out for more Reflections on the water played in wavering design You pointed to the middle when a heart shape you did find And then you whispered in my ear my wish had now come true Out here beneath this autumn moon in love, just me and you

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Date: 11/15/2016 4:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thanks so very much Gary
Date: 11/15/2016 9:11:00 AM
I love stone-skipping..and water ripples..and.those lily pads.and fireflies.. I can see.them..Thanks for the.beautiful journey..you created for us ..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for the beautiful comments on my poem. I appreciate your visits.
Date: 11/15/2016 8:18:00 AM
This poem flows with such rhythm that it practically reads itself. Love it.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much Phil. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 11/14/2016 6:30:00 PM
Very sweet moment shared, Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. Your nice comments are always the highlight of my day.
Date: 11/14/2016 5:52:00 PM
How beautiful, Chris. You found the love my bats could only fly for.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 5:53:00 PM
Ha, I like that. :) Thanks so much Sunlite, I appreciate you flying by tonight to read my poem.

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