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I Wish the Snow

I wish for the snow to only fall onto the ground Leaving the sidewalks and roads clear. So people can walk without the fear of falling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/2/2017 11:25:00 AM
wouldn't that be nice?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/2/2017 6:21:00 PM
Hello Agnes, yes that would be nice. I have trouble walking in deep,deep snow and freezing rain. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 11/26/2017 4:37:00 PM
We can but wish for that perfect world! I work with horses, and though snow is pretty, winter is definitely not my favorite season! Have a safe season Darlene :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/27/2017 12:44:00 PM
I have a fear of falling in the winter when the sidewalks are slippery. I always fear falling in the winter, I fear breaking a leg or arm. I fear the ice. It is n ot my favourite season either. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 11/24/2017 10:58:00 PM
Yeah snow looks good on postcards but is a pain in the arise really
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/25/2017 1:04:00 PM
Hello Christopher, yes the snow looks good on the post cards It is a pain for me as well, I have trouble walking in snow and ice is terrifying for me I am scared waliking on ice. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 11/22/2017 7:52:00 PM
Salut! Je détest la neige and l'hiver! Mes saisons préfère sont le printemps and l'automne! Merci pour votre commentaire. / M
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2017 7:09:00 AM
Hello Maurice so sorry I do not know what you have said. Than you for your comment. My friend. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you my friend.
Date: 11/17/2017 7:09:00 PM
Good one Darlene! I completely agree. I had a bad fall on the ice that caused a head trauma. The ice can be dangerous, especially when it is covered some with snow. Be safe. Thanks for sharing your poem :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2017 7:56:00 PM
I hav had p.f. very badly. went for laser treatment a few times, my husband was very sick at the time, I had to walk to the grocery store.Evert step i took I felt like i was going to fall down. It was awful.I almost fell oin the ice. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 11/17/2017 1:06:00 PM
Snow means "get out the shovel and go to work. Not like when you were a kid and could have fun in the snow.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2017 8:00:00 PM
I have no balance in the deep snow.I had to shovel the stsairs and it was icy, I had a hard time to keepo my balance.No winter is not fun.Have q nice evening my friend.
Date: 11/15/2017 4:48:00 AM
Nice wishful thought, Darlene. // Barry
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/15/2017 6:57:00 AM
I wish this thought every time it snows. It would make walking so much easier. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 11/14/2017 2:06:00 PM
Hey, Darlene ... I got that same wish. Lol! Cool and clever poem. Me like, me like it a lot. Very thoughtful poem. Love and smiles always.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/14/2017 5:04:00 PM
Hello Freddie,oh how nice...Thank you.Me to..Love and Joy and smiles to you as well. Have a nice evening my friend.

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