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I Wish I Could Be

I wish I could be At a waterfall For hours I would - Listen to the sounds A peaceful sound I am feeling relaxe Placing my carry bag down For hours i stare Taking in the scene Then I settle down I prepare to create Some poetry Looking around me Many others here Have the same notion They are the poets Creating poetry here Oh I wish I could be By the waterfall To sit and enjoy The sound of the waterfall

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Date: 9/29/2023 1:07:00 PM
Sounds beautiful to be looking at the waterfall. You are right, water is relaxing. For me the sea is my temple, but anywhere with water, river, lake...brings me a lot of peace. I really enjoyed this poem my friend. It's great. Have a wonderful afternoon Darlenexxxxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2023 4:03:00 PM
Hello Maria, I love the water. A lake, river, stream, a bay, A waterfall. I enjoy the sound of water. I enjoy to watch the wave come to shore .I like the ripples in the water. It brigs me peace. Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend Maria. /Darlene/
Date: 8/17/2023 10:58:00 AM
A really lovely, tranquil poem Darlene.I love the sound of flowing water. So enjoyed it thank you. Warmest wishes.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2023 4:13:00 AM
Hello Christina, Sorry i am late to respnse to your comment. It is nice to meet you. There is nothing like the sound of flowing water. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
Date: 7/14/2023 4:28:00 PM
what a sweet calming poem, and I see a potw. Way to go!!
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Date: 7/15/2023 5:01:00 AM
Hello Andrea, Hi! I see the poets and poetess to. Thank you. Hugs. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
Date: 7/10/2023 12:15:00 PM
Very nice, Darlene. Reminds me of a couple of waterfalls I have encountered along my journey.
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Date: 7/10/2023 3:49:00 PM
Hello Jim. I am glad i reminded you of the waterfalls along your journey. i love the waterfalls. Enjoy your evening my friend.\Darlene\
Date: 6/21/2023 12:02:00 PM
Enjoyed very much .Thanks or sharing
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Date: 6/22/2023 4:24:00 AM
Hello Joyce, it is so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
Date: 6/17/2023 1:05:00 PM
Hello Darlene. The waterfall sounds like a perfect place to be to reflect meditate or just sit in peace. Your entry has much imagery for the reader. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful weekend. Take Care (smile)
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Date: 6/17/2023 3:17:00 PM
Hello Lisa, Lisa, do picture myself there with other poets and poetess. You are very welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
Date: 6/14/2023 6:30:00 PM
...your write echoes the waterfall......stan
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Date: 6/15/2023 4:36:00 AM
Hello Sand Blown, Hi! Sand i love the waterfall. It is calming to look at. It is relaxing. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
Date: 6/13/2023 4:28:00 PM
Dear Darlene, Cheers and Congratulations. On your POTW… Glad I was one of the-first commentors. to this glorious work. Be sure and celebrate today! Love Pangie xx
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Date: 6/14/2023 4:34:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you for the comment. I am honored to have this POTW on this poem. Hugs. xxx/Darlene\
Date: 6/12/2023 7:59:00 AM
Lovely, Darlene. Water is condensed soul. As blood is the vehicle of spirit. Love the running sound of creek water, how it makes my mind and heart want to travel. Great inspiration for poetry! Great choice for POTD!! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/12/2023 10:41:00 AM
Hello Joe, it is so nice to see you. Yes the sound of water is peaceful for the soul. Yes the running water of a creek is wonderful to. It would be peaceful to. Thank you Joe. I am honored to have this placement. My friend, Enjoy your day. /Darlene\
Date: 6/11/2023 2:11:00 AM
what wonderful imagery Darlene, many congrats on POTW:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2023 4:07:00 AM
Hello Jan, Thank you for the lovely comment. I am honored to have this placement, A nice surprise. Hugs. xx/Darlene\
Date: 6/10/2023 6:56:00 PM
When you write poems like this Darlene, you are the waterfall in the readers heart, I love this, hope your keeping well. Been away for a while, trying to catch up with my poetry soup friends :)
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Date: 6/11/2023 4:10:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose Rose, oh I like that Mystic Rose, Rose. I am glad you are back. I hope you had a nice vacation. Hugs. /Darlene\
Date: 6/10/2023 3:36:00 PM
Poetry is where you find it.
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Date: 6/10/2023 3:40:00 PM
Hello John Loving iii, It is so nice to meet you. Yes poetry is where you find it. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
Date: 6/10/2023 1:01:00 PM
Darling Darene, what a poem, what an honor so deserved and congratulations my dear friend POTW, I'm so happy for you. Think I will join you Eve and Judy,at this wonderful, peaceful, serene waterfall. I so enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/10/2023 3:39:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, You are welcome to join Judy and , Eve, Mike and I at the waterfall. Thank you. I feel honored to get this POTW. It is an honor for this placement. Blessings & Hugs my friend./Darlene\
Date: 6/10/2023 10:40:00 AM
Me too. Lovely. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/10/2023 11:08:00 AM
Hello Judy, Yes it would be nice if this could happen . Being with poets and poetess by a waterfall. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene\
Date: 6/9/2023 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful imagery….love the sound of a waterfall…..so inspirational. Congratulations on your POTW! Paulette
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Date: 6/9/2023 10:10:00 AM
Hello Paulette, So nice to see you here. I love the waterfalls. It has a relaxing sound. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\ hugs.
Date: 6/7/2023 10:05:00 AM
Great feeling and imagery in your verse... I will join you in this peaceful place. Hugs eve
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Date: 6/7/2023 10:20:00 AM
Hello Eve, Thank you Eve. Yes cone to join me there. Hugs /Darlene\
Date: 6/6/2023 4:57:00 PM
The biggest Congratulations Darlene on POTW!! for your lovely waterfall poem. You described it beautifully…..waterfalls are so relaxing! So happy for you sweet Darlene! Debx
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Date: 6/7/2023 10:05:00 AM
Hello Deb, Thank you Deb. It was a big surprise for me. I am honored to have this POTW. Yes waterfalls are relaxing. Thank you Deb.my friend./Darlenex/
Date: 6/6/2023 8:47:00 AM
Becoming one with the waterfall, as with all poets there! This signals a shift from separateness to interconnectedness, leading to oneness. Warmest congratulations on POTW, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2023 10:59:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, I am happy to hear this wouod lead me to oneness. Thank you for this wonde4ful comment. my friend. Blessings my friend./Darlene\
Date: 6/6/2023 6:34:00 AM
A scene to stir the muse, Lovely write Darlene
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Date: 6/6/2023 11:01:00 AM
Hello Joseph May, Yes a scene to strir the muse. hank you for the lovely comment, Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Date: 6/6/2023 5:02:00 AM
Darlene, your poem is indeed mesmerizing and I wish I could also be there!!! Congratulations, it is well deserved!! happy Tuesday xxoo
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Date: 6/6/2023 11:03:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, Yes it would be lovely for both of us to be there. Thank you for the lovely comment. Happy Tuesday. /Darlene\ xxxx-oooo.
Date: 6/5/2023 3:41:00 PM
My sincerest congratulations to you, Darlene, for achieving the prestigious honor of POTD. I often find myself envisioning the majestic rush of a cascading waterfall and luxuriating in its melodic resonance.
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Date: 6/5/2023 4:19:00 PM
Hello Sotto, Thank you Sotto. I love the waterfalls. they are calming, relaxing. and different colors are seen in them when the sun shines on them. I am honored to have this POTW Enjoyyour evening my friend. Darlene/
Date: 6/5/2023 12:24:00 PM
Darlene, I too love waterfalls and find them beautiful, relaxing, and inspiring. My favorites are Multnomah Falls in Oregon and Yosemite Falls in California. Thank you for sharing your dream, and congratulations for poem of the week ~ John
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Date: 6/5/2023 2:32:00 PM
Hello John, My favourite fall is Niagara Falls in Ontario. It is beautiful there. Many people from all over come to this falls. Wedding photos are taken here. It is my favourtive pace to go. Enjoy your evening my friend.\
Date: 6/5/2023 9:39:00 AM
Relaxing heartfelt imagery in verse. Nicely done.
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Date: 6/5/2023 10:39:00 AM
Hello Denis, Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. I like the waterfalls. ot rivers, streams or lakes etc. they are all relaxing. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
Date: 6/5/2023 5:49:00 AM
Back with huge congratulations, Darlene, on your POTW honour. I often try to imagine a cascading waterfall and listening to the sound!
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Date: 6/5/2023 10:43:00 AM
Hello Mala, Thank you Mala. I am honored to have this week. Mala the sound of the waterfall is beautiful. It is a relaxing sound. So are rivers and lakes, streams etc. Love & Froendship, /Darlene\
Date: 6/5/2023 5:00:00 AM
Yayy back with CONGRATZ on your POTW recognition for this wonderful waterfall muse. Enjoy your win and day , its your day today!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2023 10:46:00 AM
Hello S. Zaynab, Thank you for coming back. thank you. I feel honored to have this POTW. I will. And thankyou. Yes it is my day today. Hugs./Darlene\
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