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*A special thanks to Joseph May again, for guidance with this difficult Rondeau form :)

I will survive all I went through I will face bad memories too I will rise above tragedy I have found freedom, to be me Knowing you will choose, what you do You tried to stop me, but I flew Away, above the harm you do Maybe someday, you all will see I will survive The loss, the pain, all you did do Survival is in the words too You cannot take away from me My choices are mine, still to be I choose to speak, I choose to write new I will survive Heidi Sands 8/12/17

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Date: 8/13/2017 6:36:00 AM
You will most certainly survive, there seems to be no end to your poetry talent this is an exceptional Roundeau, brilliant. :))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Roy. That is very kind of you to say. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 8/13/2017 4:34:00 AM
Wow, even your Rondeau's are coming around very nicely! You are becoming a very skilled writer of many forms my friend! I am excited to see what you will write next! It is wondrous to read your poetry when you have such a rich selection of forms! Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:27:00 AM
Hi Russell. The Rondeau form has been the most difficult yet. I still correct mistakes to correct afterwards and thankfully get some guidance too. I am so happy you enjoy the poems and look forward to more. Thank you!
Date: 8/12/2017 6:54:00 PM
A very uplifting write Heidi...Very nice Rondeau, best wishes
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Joseph May
Date: 8/12/2017 6:59:00 PM
You are welcome my friend
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Joseph for your kind comment and support with my learning these new forms :)
Date: 8/12/2017 1:59:00 PM
A beautiful inspiring poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Alesia :)
Date: 8/12/2017 1:44:00 PM
You most certainly will survive...No stopping you, Heidi. All the best...I liked what I read...Have a nice day
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Arturo! I appreciate your comment. Happy to hear you like what you read :) Have a nice day !
Date: 8/12/2017 11:18:00 AM
Good uplifting ending, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)

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