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I Will See You Soon

Her husband of ten years left her all was a blur She sat and wept of vows not kept They met at a middle school dance it was by chance now she's so blue, heart is in two Later on, she heard he was sick he passed on quick She met him soon one afternoon Contest: 12 Lines In Rhyme Sponsor: Joseph May 07-22-2021

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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 7/30/2021 9:50:00 AM
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We knew a family , mom 70,dad 72, son about 45, all overweight. the father had a bad back and had an operation, he smoked about 60 cigarettes a day, finally his lungs gave in, he died. Their son cycled and one day whilst cycling had a heart attack and died. The mom wasn't well, and smoked like a chimney - she had emphysema, and looked like death, which took her by the hand one day. All three family members died within 2 years, tragic. Hugs and blessings - awesome poem, but very sad. Jenn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 5:31:00 AM
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Fraught with sadness! Congratulations!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/27/2021 8:32:00 PM
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Glad to see this on the winner's list, congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 10:02:00 AM
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Very poignant in its irony Alexis. Congratulations on your win.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/26/2021 11:02:00 AM
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Congratulations on your well deserved win. When deep within love is present, meeting is inevitable. Well penned!
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Dyuti Biswas
Date: 7/26/2021 10:54:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. It's beautiful.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 10:54:00 AM
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I am back to give my congratulations on your outstanding win, Alexis. A touching poem. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/26/2021 10:31:00 AM
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Love can bring heartbreak and sadness, Very nicely penned Alexis, Congrats on your win
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/26/2021 10:44:00 AM
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Hi Joseph, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 10:13:00 AM
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Wonderful piece of writing on seeing soon. Congratulations on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2021 9:21:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write yet so sad. Life has sadness in it. Have a blessed day....................
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Marilene Evans
Date: 7/26/2021 9:08:00 AM
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Congrats, Alexis. Have a great day.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2021 9:13:00 AM
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Nicely done for the contest. It sounds like they are together again!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/23/2021 9:30:00 PM
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Since they're both angels, they should get along now. This is wonderful, Alexis. Best wishes for the contest. :) Evelyn
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2021 4:08:00 PM
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Oh my, this is quite good. I wonder if that was heaven for her and hell for him?
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/23/2021 12:11:00 PM
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Perhaps she met him TOO soon?
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/23/2021 11:17:00 AM
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Never to be apart Alexis, good luck in the contest Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/23/2021 8:44:00 AM
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A sad ending, but together again. Well written Alexis, Best wishes… Belle
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/23/2021 8:00:00 AM
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This is so sad, but well written, good luck in the contest-
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2021 5:35:00 AM
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They met in heaven again. Well crafted, Alexis. All the ebst.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/22/2021 10:33:00 PM
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Emotional poem. Best for a win.
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