I Will Never Forget

mother your arms that held me pressed and your kisses on my cheek your voice singing me a lullaby so I could sleep your tears of love when I was sick or sad and how you kissed my hurts away when I fell at play or when my heart was broken always my safe harbor you forgave me every stupid thing (and there was a lot) you accepted me with unconditional love always stood by me with pride your door was always open your home always mine you said you were the best mother a girl could have so when you became sick, oh so sick when you were dying, mother it was I who pressed you to my heart and kissed your cheek with unconditional love, love and pride my hands tried to soothe your pain away but I could not so I stayed by your side for days and shed tears until your last breath_ _________________________ May 13, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/I Will Never Forget Copyright Protected, ID 20-1251-872-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for I Will Never Forget sponsor, Silent One First Place
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Date: 5/18/2020 5:25:00 PM
WOW!!!!! Congratulations on your win. Your pen wrote love. It is a beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:14:00 AM
Constance, such a tender full-circle tale of love returning to the one who first taught you what love is. Felt even more by those of us who have buried a mother... loved "always my safe harbor", this describes my mother perfectly. Thank you for committing your sadness to poetry and sharing with others who can benefit from shedding a communal tear. Bless you, my friend, and congrats for your win. Warm hugs ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2020 9:32:00 AM
John, thanks for your kind words, there is no greater pain than losing one's mother (to me anyways) my mom died so young, it was unfair that such a beautiful and kind person had to suffer, not a day goes by that I do not press her memory to my heart, thanks for the congrats , appreciate _Constance
Date: 5/17/2020 4:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win and empathise with your terrible loss, a vaccum that can never be filled. Kind regards
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2020 6:26:00 PM
Krish, thanks for the congrats and kind words, it was a difficult time for me _Constance
Date: 5/17/2020 12:55:00 PM
What a beautiful and loving tribute to your mother, Constance. I really love the way you took this poem - your mother's love and how you had the chance to "mother" her because she taught you about a mother's love. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings to you.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2020 6:27:00 PM
Sam, thanks so much for your compassion and congratulations _Constance
Date: 5/17/2020 8:39:00 AM
This tribute to the memories of your mother would touch anyone to the core. I hope you always carry her essence with you and remember her through the smiles she shared and the person she made you. God bless you. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2020 9:43:00 AM
Aditi, thanks for the congratulations and your kind words, this is a pain I will keep and never forget _Constance
Date: 5/17/2020 7:49:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to your mum.. We never forget those who loved us and cared for us unconditionally... sad, but beautiful poetry.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2020 9:44:00 AM
Silent, thanks for the contest and my awesome placement, I am happy you could read the deep love and deep grief in my words _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 12:35:00 AM
This poignant, sad and so loving. A lovely Mother's Day poem. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Love, Joyce
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:37:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for visiting my poem, yes I have great sadness and love for my mother gone above _Constance
Date: 5/13/2020 5:50:00 PM
Longing to hug the stuffings out of you. We share but a bit of your heart, the part you are wiiling for us to see. Hugs...Kim
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2020 6:15:00 PM
Kim, thanks so much for your compassion, people have told me I have sad eyes, I hold a lot of pain within and only through poetry can I let it go _Constance
Date: 5/13/2020 3:59:00 PM
A very touching write Constance, should do well in the contest!
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:16:00 PM
John, thanks for the encouragement, well we never know what a sponsor will think of a poem but I do hope Silent can feel the true pain within my words _Constance
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