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I Will Never Forget

As the pulse of your loving heart beats in mine Scent of your charisma, graced by your beauty, Evokes jubilation of blossoming spring revelry Lilting elegantly within prairies of my memory. Summer of dreams still wears your happy smiles Surfing cerulean waters on cresting ocean tides Recalling aspirations of sand-castles you built Carved carefully on the beaches of my reveries. Music I hear strums tunes of dulcet melodies In evening that echoes cheers of verdant hills Being enchanted by the passions of our first kiss Applauding the symphony of romantic feelings. When it was time to part, we never said goodbyes As you departed with a gift of love appended, Cherishing our vows blushing-moon witnessed Promising a return, to build sand-castles again. But alas, I waited till your imprints faded away, Thoughts that now linger have not much to say Except how time changed everything we meant When our seasons greeted advent of new days. Yet, I dwell silently in glow of your gentle ways-- Precious bond you bestowed, I will never forget, Though winds of fervid dawn have since drifted I remember how gaily aurora of love brightened When spectrum of your aura gilded my horizon. May 13, 2020 Placed 2nd: I will never forget poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One HM: Brian's Choice H Contest

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Date: 5/25/2020 10:14:00 AM
An avid reader will never forget a fine poetry that resonates with their hearts and minds.. An avid reader will never forget the taste of sweetness and the feel of wonderment when reading such poetry! Dear Vijay, giving due respect and admiration for your adept pen and artistry is the least my humble words can express.. My great pleasure! Best regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/25/2020 11:43:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Besma--delighted to see you in this space. Many thanks.
Date: 5/19/2020 9:17:00 AM
Congrats Vijay bhai. shalom, shalOM.
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:53:00 AM
I told you this was a winning entry :) Dropping by again to congratulate you Vijay.
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:01:00 AM
That is a beautiful opening stanza, great choice of words... the last stanza is also beautifully sad.. there is no pain like loss.. something we never forget.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:59:00 PM
You place your heart upon the page. I can feel every moment and emotion. You will never forget. It is so evident. Your thoughts caress softly around me. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/15/2020 8:32:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always, my friend. Many thanks. Be safe!
Date: 5/14/2020 2:54:00 PM
YoOu have a wide spectrum of talent Vijay, much enjoyed this poem, Keep well
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 5/14/2020 2:26:00 PM
Beautiful! Sure to be on the winners list, my friend. ~ Elaine
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:04:00 PM
Honored by your visit Elaine--much appreciate--many thanks my friend.
Date: 5/14/2020 12:38:00 PM
Your vivid blend of literal and figurative language conveys a powerful message about love treasured--then lost. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 5/14/2020 12:22:00 PM
bewitched by the reminisces of your deep love for another...who could forget what might have become?...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:03:00 PM
So very kind of you, Nette--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 5/14/2020 9:39:00 AM
Your write evokes such passion and romance Vijay, it also could not be forgotten! You really have a talent for weaving such strong feeling through your verses.' A great entry for the contest, Good Luck!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:03:00 PM
So very kind of you, Mike. Much appreciate the kind feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 5/14/2020 4:01:00 AM
Lovely composition Vijay..Passion of first kiss..a passionate write..Good luck in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:02:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 5/13/2020 4:10:00 PM
What an emotionally charged write Vijay, loved every word...lilting... nice word seldom used...brings a freshness to the write!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:02:00 PM
Honored by your visit and comments, John. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 5/13/2020 2:32:00 PM
So many mellow and beautiful memories, Vijay! A love like that could never die!! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:01:00 PM
Much appreciate, Paul. Many thanks. Regards.
Date: 5/13/2020 11:00:00 AM
Eternal love :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 4:00:00 PM
Many thanks Swetha--much appreciate.
Date: 5/13/2020 9:21:00 AM
How beautifully you have described a love like this that has dissolved into one's existence even after so long! This is definitely a winning entry as it lingers in the senses after being read. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 3:59:00 PM
That is so very kind of you. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Aditi. Many thanks.
Date: 5/13/2020 8:07:00 AM
A sad verse Vijay but one that stokes up beautiful memories for you, and memories that stay with you forever. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 3:58:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments Tom--many thanks.
Date: 5/13/2020 7:32:00 AM
"Precious are few of the moments we two have shared", excellent Vijay, best wishes...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 3:57:00 PM
Much appreciate Charlie--many thanks.
Date: 5/13/2020 7:26:00 AM
sigh, this was so poignant yet beautiful Vijay... I know this one will top the contest...such a beautiful read this morning... hugs :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/14/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thank you for the vote of confidence my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Sandy--many thanks.

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