I Will Love You More

As we step closer to our final door,
when words succumb to days of restless sleep,
and dance retreats into a stiffened creep,
I wonder, will you love me even more?
For I will answer with my final breath,
that I will love you more on coldest night
as outer beauty dims to inner light
when aging hands entwined do embrace death.

Tis easier to love in summer heat,
while springtime of our love does not yet slip
from thoughts and dew still moistens our warm lips.
Our June days liven blooms beneath our feet!
But autumn days will fade to wintry snow
as surely as my love for you will grow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2017 11:20:00 AM
Clearly a magnificent romantic sonnet ! A7 and a fav my friend for this one sings of love's triumph over even death!
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Date: 2/13/2017 10:35:00 AM
I love this sonnet Rhonda! You have such a way with words :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/13/2017 10:33:00 AM
This is a worthy entry, congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/13/2016 2:09:00 PM
When you are at your best, Rhonda, your poetry is about as good as it gets...From anybody! Some fantastic lines here..."As outer beauty dims to inner light". Superbly conceived! My very best regards to you, Rhonda...and my warmest wishes. :) john
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:36:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:45:00 PM
What a beautiful sonnet, my love for your poetry surely grows after this! Hugs
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:45:00 PM
Ops, I forgot to congrats you on the win, well deserved!
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful sonnet!
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:48:00 AM
Very nicely done Rhonda, beautiful flow and great rhyme.
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:50:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Rhonda. Sure to top the winners list. And...thank you for your kind comments on my Italian Sonnet. Elaine
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:32:00 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love Linda
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Date: 2/22/2016 10:46:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Rhonda.
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Date: 2/22/2016 5:27:00 PM
Well done congrats a lovely poem x
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Date: 2/22/2016 2:45:00 PM
Well done and congratulations on this win, Rhonda.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place sonnet, Rhonda. It is absolutely deserving as your heart is in this write. Peace my friend:)
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