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I went to a beautiful Utopia heavenly, Floating above the blue azure firmament; I found myself in a Paradise lovely. The angels were singing a sweet melody, I felt bliss, rapture and contentment; I went to a beautiful Utopia heavenly, Opening the gate, I stood breathlessly, The air full of an enchanting scent; I found myself in a Paradise lovely. All my beloved embraced me tenderly, I let go of tears and found contentment; I went to a beautiful Utopia heavenly. I was greeted by God very respectably, Sublime the flowers and trees resplendent; I found myself in a Paradise lovely. In Heaven the birds all chirp happily, And all my pets dwell in this firmament; I went to a beautiful Utopia heavenly, I found myself in a Paradise lovely. ____________________ November 26, 2015 Villanelle Written by Broken Wings For the contest, I Went To Heaven, sponsor, Laura Urbaniak Second Place

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Date: 12/3/2015 9:50:00 AM
Lovely poem BW.
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Date: 12/3/2015 3:26:00 PM
James, thanks for the lovely, first Villanelle I ever wrote, love the form for repeating lines, it seemed difficult at first but once I got the flow of it, it was wonderful to write ~
Date: 12/3/2015 12:25:00 AM
Congrats! Very well-written.
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:41:00 AM
Susan, thanks so much for visiting and the congrats ~
Date: 12/2/2015 11:53:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:41:00 AM
Thank you Skat ~
Date: 12/2/2015 10:46:00 PM
Ah such a beauty Broken.. congrats on superb win!
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Upma for the congrats ~
Date: 12/2/2015 5:57:00 PM
Beautiful write Broken Wings, love your pets part. Congratulations Constance on your win!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:12:00 PM
Michael, thanks for visiting, oh yes, I do hope those pets are waiting for me also ~
Date: 12/2/2015 5:47:00 PM
BW, this is beautiful and it has lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2015 9:13:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the beautiful and lovely and congrats ~
Date: 12/2/2015 3:39:00 PM
Such a lovely, flowing poem, Broken Wings, and filled with imagery of heavenly beauty. Congratulations on your nice win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:28:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting and for the congrats and the 7!
Date: 12/2/2015 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Nayda for the congratulations ~
Date: 12/2/2015 11:45:00 AM
Love the way you experimentwith all forms! You glide your way to heaven! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:40:00 PM
Balveen, thanks for the congrats, oh yes that is my new thing, I want to try even the most difficult forms ~
Date: 12/2/2015 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win Broken Wings. Nice poem. I like the flow, and I could understand the emotions that were felt in heaven. Blessings my friend. Curtis.
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Curtis for the congrats and the nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/2/2015 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win and I'm in love with the new form you used! Thank you for being a part in my contest-lu *smiles*
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:42:00 PM
Laura, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am so honored. Oh yes, I am trying all sort of forms, and I really liked this one ~
Date: 12/1/2015 8:43:00 AM
A very nice Villanelle, Broken Wings. Looking forward to a glorious forever.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2015 12:53:00 PM
Cona,thanks for visiting, this may be my first Villanelle
Date: 11/27/2015 11:50:00 AM
As usual a beautiful poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thomas, thank you for the beautiful !

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