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I Was Your Lover

I was your lover you will have a new bed mate her name is regret Roya

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2014 5:12:00 PM

Great I like this! :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/22/2014 9:28:00 AM

You spoke your mind with this one. I can relate to these words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Moein Jr

Date: 7/22/2014 1:02:00 AM

Salam Eileen jan,Senryue shoma kheili zibast, man dar javabe in shere shoma, ye quatrain soroodam, omidvaram ke bepasandid va khoshetoon biad: Nous étions inséparable/ Comme le soleil et le rosé!/ Qu'est-ce qui arrive de cette amour introuvable?/ Que je me trouve seul ce soir,cassé, brisé, imploré?! / Rooze khoobi dashte bashid, shahre shoma ziba tarin jaye donyast , salame man ro be Beirute royaha beresoonid ! XOXO-Moein (Le Tigre Noir) Ps.Roya esme kheili zibaie,Mobaraketoon bashe!

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/21/2014 12:55:00 AM

Stunning metaphor Eileen. Regret is a bad bet. Any man that steps away from a woman like you is in pain I'm sure. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/21/2014 9:36:00 AM

Oh....Thank you for saying that, Justin. That is so so sweet of you. I'm not an easy person. I need a lot of maintenance...Very emotional...demanding...needy and a perfectionist. Perhaps...there is joy in stepping away, but it does my good to read this post. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/20/2014 9:59:00 AM

You could have written this listening to Angel Eyes....powerful my dear...hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:09:00 AM

Thanks, Tim! Yes, it does fit with that song, doesn't it? But I just listening to it today...thanks to your poem. Hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/20/2014 8:51:00 AM

It sounds like he is in for some cold nights.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you for your visit, Richard. Glad to have you hear what I have to say...supporting me. I'm glad you're in my life.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/20/2014 5:16:00 AM

OK! No comments needed!! Straight to the point! Sweet revenge ... and no regrets:) a top7 rating. // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/21/2014 9:38:00 AM

Oh! HA HA! I didn't know that. Well...I'm still contest shy, Paul. I've joined one or two. Waiting for Isaiah's results...and Nette's. Keeping my fingers crossed.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2014 10:20:00 AM

Oh! definitely! PD would love it, but not for the present contest....there is one snag...her entries have to fit in a bottle!! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:11:00 AM

:) You are a masterful with your comments. You know that, right? Thank you for enjoying the revenge with me...at least here in words! :) Think I have a chance with PD with this one?

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/20/2014 1:23:00 AM

Sets him right Eileen ! Loved this one,, few subtle words n much said // Upma//

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:12:00 AM

If only I could! :) Thank you Dr. Upma...Hugs to you

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/20/2014 12:17:00 AM

Wow Wow Wow, never have I read 3 lines that speak volumes like this!!!!!! This is an A7 for sure!!!!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 10:12:00 AM

Never? ;) Are you sure...NEVER EVER? Well, thanks ever so much, Arthur. I'm beaming.