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I was born here Poetry Contest 

Sponsored by Anoushka Gangabissoon

Third Place

"The Ballad of Jed Clampett" 

Come and listen to a story about a man named Jed
A poor mountaineer, barely kept his family fed,
Then one day he was shootin at some food,
And up through the ground came a bubblin crude.

Oil that is, black gold, Texas tea.

Well the first thing you know ol Jed's a millionaire,
Kinfolk said "Jed move away from there"
Said "Californy is the place you ought to be"
So they loaded up the truck and moved to Beverly.

Hills, that is. Swimmin pools, movie stars.

Well now its time to say good by to Jed and all his kin.
And they would like to thank you folks fer kindly droppin in.
You're all invited back a gain to this locality
To have a heapin helpin of their hospitality

Hillybilly that is. Set a spell, Take your shoes off.  
Y'all come back now, y'hear?

I was born in Sunny Southern California, in the hottest month of the year! cries out my mother. California is known for its drought season; one we just came out of, it lasted four years. Imagine no rain, or very little rain. California is the 31st state of the union on September 9, 1850, and by the early 1960s it was the most populous U.S. state. Pacific Ocean in the west, in summer, we’d pack the cooler up with sodas, sandwiches and chips, take the 5 to the beach. At night you could see the car lights making an S shape coming down the “hill” going N back to the valley. California's wonderlands' spans from Eureka "The Magic City” “Little Switzerland of the Ozarks" to San Diego oceanography, marine biology research and military presence. A mishmash of cultures and banging restaurants from every nationality. Earthquakes are common, a big one hit in 1994, the earthquake's epicenter was in Northridge, 6.7 a city in the San Fernando Valley, I was out of town, my mother was amid its devastating thrust fault. It rocked her right out of bed, and she had to evacuate her village apartment on campus of CSUN. She worked for admissions and records, the building destroyed, a dome was built to replace it. The Hollywood film industry and its dark and scandalous history and iconic celebrities is still a phenomenon. Latinos remain woefully underrepresented both in front of and behind the camera. The Golden Gate Bridge, on one of my travels the marine layer so thick, I couldn’t see in front of me as I drove. We get the same marine layers from the beaches at the end of Topanga Canyon. Throughout its length, it has left its mark on the L.A. rock and roll scene. Musicians such as Crosby Stills, Nash & Young, Peter Tork and many more stayed there. Disneyland, and Silicon Valley and Rodeo Dr. are here. It’s also famous for its Giant Redwoods. Up in Northern California are the wine countries. The first vineyards were planted as early as the 1700s, by Spanish missionaries creating wine for religious use. Further on up, San Francisco’s Wharf and my favorite, Fish ‘n Chips. The theme song for the T.V. series The Beverly Hillbillies by Paul Henning. This ballad grew on me over years of listening to the series, I pictured hillbillies coming to California from Texas. Something most evil did come here in the 60’s that would change the course of the Jesus Freaks, the Hippie Movement and its innocence forever. Charles Manson from Ohio, who stood 5’2, single-handedly recruited, cajoled and demonized members of his cult The Manson Family. I wished he’d never come to California.

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Date: 7/8/2023 10:47:00 AM
I love California. I have lived most part of my life living here(both in L.A. and San Francisco area). Nice tribute, And a win!
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Date: 7/8/2023 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Jay!
Date: 6/14/2023 7:45:00 AM
Anaya love where you come from. The Spanish named it California after Montalvo's mythical island. They at one time thought it was an island. My brother Gus and I lived in Los Angeles with my uncle for a year. My parents approved until my head was cracked open by a gang. In 2006 I visited Orland California North of Chico. I spent two months there and almost moved. I loved the climate and all the classic car that looked brand new, the orange tree, Pistachio, Olive trees. Absolutely loved it...
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Date: 6/25/2023 9:39:00 AM
Yes my daughter likes it up north as well! I'm a southern cali girl. Thank you for your visit, it was nice of you.
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Date: 6/25/2023 9:37:00 AM
Michael, is that right? I'll check it out. Oh my God, Michael what part of L.A. like East L.A.? Wow, what a scary experience, I'm so glad you are here and well. Gas? 4.79 a gal. I never complain, I voted for higher gas taxes, it pays for infrastructure, pot holes, and bridges [subway stuff] :D
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Date: 6/14/2023 7:48:00 AM
I heard the gas prices there are unbelievable, and it is very expensive to live there. I love the Napa valley, and northern California. Paradise, Willows, Red Bluff, Chico, Orland. Just gorgeous. Thanks for sharing...
Date: 6/12/2023 12:35:00 PM
Nice info provided in this work Anaya. An enjoyable read. I loved CA in the 60s ;) I haven't been there in some years, but I remember the trips and monarchs, ice plants, Strawberry Fields in the park, Fisherman's Wharf (yes, fish and chips - and the "internationally famous Trader Vic's" LOL), the Redwoods, and Big Sur, and Napa valley. Thankfully, I did not meet Manson!! From Texas, but I think "hillbilly" would be the last thing anyone would call me. :)))
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Date: 6/12/2023 12:50:00 PM
Oh, you know my state so well, glad you have great experiences in youth and travels, those memories stay with us forever! I think it's Mexibillies in them there Mex Tex hillside's, lOl.
Date: 6/11/2023 1:55:00 PM
Such an informative piece on your own state Anaya, your poetry is nice too with good rhyme and flow too as well as nice imagery and insightfulness too. Blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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Date: 6/11/2023 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon! I glad you enjoyed, hope you are well. Best wishes~Anaya
Date: 6/1/2023 1:22:00 PM
Wow, a Cali girl, huh? I lived in Hayward for five years when my hubbie got lots of framing work for a company near S.F. I loved S. F and fisherman's wharf. I have many good memories from my time in the bay area. but our son was becoming like a small gangsta at only age 9 and we headed back to Utah. Much better out here. CA. is going to the dogs!!!!
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Date: 6/7/2023 6:15:00 PM
My research finds Utah, S.L.C. ranks as the 2nd-most friendly city in the country for the LGBTQIA+ community. There can be issues for some families if they attend services through the Mormon faith at times. Although there is a certain acceptance that exists there, especially if you can support yourself and respect differences, you can encounter the occasional zealot who demands compliance with their specific religious beliefs – and this disadvantage is not confined to just the Mormons. Nice to visit. It’s so beautiful there, Andrea. I like that California's Christians and non-Christians help one another no matter what religion or color they are, African Americans don't have the mark of Ham here:)
Date: 6/1/2023 2:21:00 AM
You were lucky to be born in a famous state in the US. I can imagine how big your state is. I live in a thimble of a country, corrupt as ever.
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Date: 6/1/2023 9:03:00 AM
You should write about it and enter it in the contest. I'm sure Malta has its moments. I'm proud to be an American for the right reasons, many have given their lives making change for us. That's what's special about America.
Date: 5/31/2023 6:49:00 PM
Hi Anaya, You born in a good state. California has many people from diverse backgrounds. I liked the Beverly Hillbillies. I could watch it right now. Have you been on the Hollywood walk of fame? Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:00:00 PM
I must have done something right in the past life. Yes, many times, there is a theatre nearby Pantages Theatre, I go see the musicals, Hair-South Pacific-Peter Pan-In The Mood-Zoot Suit and so many more. Until covid, Hollywood Bl was part of my hike onward to Griffith Park. I miss it. A good evening to you. Btw I think all should enter this contest, makes for a great conversation!
Date: 5/31/2023 6:20:00 PM
California is truly a mishmash of cultures and banging restaurants from every nationality. I use to watch and enjoyed The Beverly Hillbillies.. My husband's mom was like Granny, a character. Enjoyed reading ..
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:52:00 PM
That's great, I love granny, who doesn't a hootenanny that granny! It's turning out to be a fun contest, and that's what makes us come together, the contests. Thank you, Eve, have a nice evening~Anaya
Date: 5/31/2023 5:56:00 PM
Apart from the drought season in California and having had the horrific Manson come to the town what a wonderful place to live in Anaya. Love the theme tune and lyrics to the Beverly Hillbillies series…Belle
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:01:00 PM
Hi Belle, yes, I added tidbits and personal stories or else I was afraid it would sound like a travel ad! Thank you, I do too. hugs~Anaya
Date: 5/31/2023 3:44:00 PM
You’ve done a great job here Anaya, giving us all a little taste of California’s cultural history and diversity, even resurrecting the classic Beverly Hillbillies theme song, although I prefer Californication by the red hot Chilli peppers, yes unfortunately Manson came to town, the little shit, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:24:00 PM
The Beverly Hills theme was used to unfold the story of Manson, hello. (lol) I like that song, saw them in San Diego, Pearl Jam, then Nirvana opened up for them. Thank you, David!
Date: 5/31/2023 1:46:00 PM
When I moved here decades ago, there was no drought.I lived in SoCal when Elena was 5. Much hotter than there than in Northern CA.Where we live now. Hey…glad the fought isover. I liked this wite and the images and the descriptions of your early yeats. Hugs, Panagiota
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:47:00 PM
I had Las Vegas and changed it to Rodeo Dr. because it's not in Calif. hahaha. It feels like it is. It's been a cool May, they say the coolest it's been on record since 1979! Hoping for a nice summer, not scorching hot. Thank you for fun visits, Pangie ;D
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/31/2023 5:35:00 PM
Oh, my! I meany draught not fought. Please do forgive meant draught, not fought. I don’t live in a smoggy area.I had a cool job on Rodeo Drive. I took Maria to Santa Monica Pier to ride the merry go round. Had friends is Brentwood.but I missed NoCal anyhow. Take care With love, Panagiotaxxx.
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie! Me too no fights, I promise you. Scorching fires, ashes on my hair, smog ugh! Just finished it! xhugsx
Date: 5/31/2023 11:55:00 AM
Woah he became a millionaire with black gold, what an enjoyable ballad on a chap from yer place. Kudos for the fine rhyming!  >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:34:00 PM
Hi Szaynab, yes something like that, thank you for the visit! hugs
Date: 5/31/2023 10:58:00 AM
A beautiful state you live in Anaya, one I visited many years ago. The Beverly hillbillies took me right back Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:42:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed Tom! It was partly used to unfold the Manson history tidbit.

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