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I want your SEEDS

**"And his name was Jack"** No one perceives what abides above the clouds. A giant, a harp, maybe golden eggs. I demand to see and feel before I believe. A castle, a dream…. I want the magic beans!!! ~~~ I'm the daughter of a farmer. I have a donkey to ride, a story to tell. “Jack and the Beanstalk” my favorite tale. Once upon a morbid dawn. I inhale a tiny simple yawn Like the morning sun levitating over the farm, I rise towards the village square to sell my *** Along the open path, my *** and I desired a drink. Near the rustic river, I'd seen an old Englishman, sitting on a log. It looked as if time was approaching his brink. In his hand, he had a sack. A bag, a bag, embroil of ivory and black. His eyes were not from this ground. His body fragile - it uttered a moaning sound. He was of dirt. I was pure. He pledged his life to me. I debated .... with many thoughts, Although his eyes... My eyes... Will never meet again. "I want what's in the bag!" In a gasp, he whispers, "I'll give you anything for that ***. my legs and bones can’t hold up on their own!” I knelt down to where he sat Smelling his essence of rot I reached forward and grabbed his baggage He griped, "This bag is all I got!" I answered, "And this sir is a fine ***!" He replied, "I have no cash." Scowling at him, “NO I want your demon seeds!" My blood grew thin... Inhaling and exhaling - his sin The old man all shriveled and timeworn, Proposed the birthright of the seeds. "Yes, plant them! Plant them!" I cried excitedly! He pats the field. Said "there I am done, now clock as it expands" To breed this story short... He dispenses his seeds. AND, I GAVE HIM MY ***. BY;PD

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Date: 7/12/2016 12:19:00 PM
I also enjoyed it immensely .send photo of ass please
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Date: 4/20/2016 3:54:00 PM
OMG, you had me laughing at, "I grabbed my ass to stroll along the open path." I thoroughly enjoyed, "I Want your SEEDS."
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:10:00 PM
a "Poet Destroyer" indeed,
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:57:00 PM
Linda.. I loved your take on this contest, your winning poem was a hoot!
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Date: 8/16/2015 4:18:00 AM
A girl after my own heart - loving the last line ;)
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:26:00 AM
Congrats on the win! I loved the many levels in it.
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Date: 8/14/2015 2:51:00 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece,PD...Congrats on your win.This is splendid.
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Date: 8/14/2015 7:41:00 AM
the imagery made me smile Linda - your creativity is indeed limitless:-0 hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2015 8:19:00 PM
This write is crazy cool! I read so many alternate (but subtle) aspects into it... I suppose that's by design though, huh? Congrats on your win, Linda. xoxo
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Date: 8/13/2015 6:57:00 PM
ME Awesome.. YES!!! :)
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Quincy Mac
Date: 11/21/2015 8:32:00 PM
Yup, your Awesome alright!! What a great poem which I enjoyed a lot. I envisioned and felt myself sitting upon that ass strolling along the open path. I really need to get myself a new ink cartridge for my printer. I will printing a lot of your poems so I can read them from paper :) Aroha, Quincy Mac
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/13/2015 8:19:00 PM
Yes - you ROCK!
Date: 8/13/2015 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on this lovely win, Linda! Coming back here gave me the chance to read this creative poem again! // paul
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Date: 8/13/2015 2:32:00 PM
So rad. Dig your style. Congrats.
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Date: 8/13/2015 8:46:00 AM
I remember this piece, I enjoyed reading it again. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:13:00 AM
Poetry has no limits.... U SO R!GHT..... skat
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Date: 8/12/2015 10:24:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Linda! Congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 8/12/2015 9:33:00 PM
wonderful :) congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/24/2015 1:19:00 PM
Cant agree more lucky jack :) smile love it
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Date: 12/25/2014 9:26:00 AM
Reminds me of a poem i wrote quite sometime back about BDSM. It is a very long, explicit poem. I think perhaps it had better stay hidden for a while; would not wish to offend. :) I really did enjoy reading this poem of yours. It demonstrates originality and creativity...Excellent!! :) john.
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Date: 11/9/2014 6:48:00 PM
crazy. loved it.
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:04:00 PM
you want my seeds? shouldn't you kiss me first.
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:01:00 PM
great play on words, great twist of the story, great poetry, great Caesars Ghost did you notice the time. I have to run.
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Date: 8/29/2014 2:01:00 PM
Dear Linda, In your poem there is good planting of seeds. Your creating power is great and what a poem which you have made connection with farmer, baggage, seeds and ass to compose the poem. I really enjoyed after reading your poem. Great work. Thanks and regards. Kamal
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Date: 8/13/2014 9:21:00 AM
It reminiscence of ,Ernest Hemingway,s ,old man & sea story, Such a story was encapsulated in a poem. Fascinating indeed..Linda Ch v ramana
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:01:00 PM
Absolutely loved this! I had a wry smile on my face the entire time I was reading it. The wit, genius. Love & light, Linda. - Raven
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:53:00 PM
I love the subtleness of this...how risqué ...If I had a free day I would love to sit and read your poetry or better yet you read it to me :) .....hugs Tim
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