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I Want To Love You - Yo Quiero Amarte

I want to love you - Yo Quioero Amarte I want to love you and I want you to love me too. I want for your world to be my world. I don't want to force you. I rather lose you then to get crumbs of your love. I don't want you to stop loving me - if it's true that you still do. I want you to love me forever, just the way that I love you... Yo Quiero Amarte Yo quiero amarte. y que tu me ames tambien. Yo quiero que tu mundo sea mi mundo. Yo no quiero forsate,, prefiero perderte antes que agarar migajas te tu amor. Yo no quiero que me dejes de amar, si es que todavia me amas. Yo quiero que me ames por siempre, asi como yo te amo a ti... 02/25/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 3/29/2013 5:19:00 PM

Primero quiero darle las gracias por tus comentarios. Si soy yo en mis poemas, asi me siento, pero ni modo. Me ecnata tu poema. Creo que me gusta mejor la version en espanol, pero debe de ser porque espanol es un idioma del amor. Gracias por avisar me de esta poema. Yo me pierdo a veces, pero siempre estoy revisando mi email. Buen trabajo.

Dan Kearley

Date: 3/28/2013 12:34:00 AM

Crumbs of your love....Oh the pain! A sad love filled write Lucilla. :*(

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 3/27/2013 4:41:00 AM

Poetry about love is always welcome. One so full of passion like yours here is enjoyed most. Well done, Lucilla, many thnx for the comments that i receive off and on from you:) Jag

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/25/2013 11:13:00 AM

beautiful poetry Lucilla, some one i'm sure will heed the call....

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/25/2013 9:39:00 AM

awwee... dear sweet Lucilla... how sweet and beautiful is your verses.. am so enjoyed this piece.. <3 <3 <3 :) Sk

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/25/2013 9:26:00 AM

Yo go girl... in any language, it's all the same! No half love... want the whole enchilada! Oh yessssss! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2013 8:51:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..It speaks of truth..I would not want a love that was only leftovers..Thanks for stopping by..I have not exactly decided on which way to go with my poem about the death angle..Sara

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 3/24/2013 3:22:00 PM

Oh, so sweet, Lucilla. You lay it on the line :)

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2013 5:50:00 AM

What a passionate poem you have penned here Lucilla!!Love this.Got to learn Spanish:)

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2013 3:48:00 AM

This is so beautiful and romantic my dear friend Lucilla. I love it so much! I love Spanish also although I am not good because some of our words came from Spanish and my parents and grandparents know how to speak the language. Before, it was part of our school curriculum but before my batch had entered that year, they've already abolished it as one of the course. So, I wasn't lucky lol. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind visit. Thanks for the info. about the origin of my fav. flower.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/24/2013 3:49:00 AM

Have a happy and blessed Easter Season and Palm Sunday today! love and big hugs, Leonora

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/23/2013 9:09:00 PM

This is so beautiful, even in your second language(Spanish?)! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful voice you have, speaking of love and all its stirring! Lovely Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 7:51:00 PM

muy Hermoso, guapa!! Me gusta ver los dos versiones de tu poema!

Donna Jones

Date: 3/23/2013 4:49:00 PM

Very lovely Lucilla....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2013 1:11:00 PM

- A sweet and romantic poem (X 2) Lucilla. - I love it! - Have a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)