Example- for my current contest
Being there as the clouds drift by Seeing all the colors in the sky Makes me want to try to fly Sakes, if birds can do it, why can't I? Trying can't be hard at all Flying's got to be my call After all, I was a pilot for years (Laughter)- If only I had Dumbo's ears
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