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I want a piece of chocolate cake Oh and a delicious piece of cherry pie I want a piece of that place called Fort Knox With all those pieces I could afford a lot I want a piece of that lady over there In her haute couture she saunters with such flair I want a piece of the clouds in the sky I just want it, don't ask me why! I want some tiny peace of mind To have some pieces left to be kind Then I can give you a piece of Art A piece I promise comes straight from the heart

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Date: 1/3/2018 5:19:00 PM
Cute Poem Arthur
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Date: 12/15/2017 10:11:00 AM
Hello Arthur, Congratulations on POTD here!! I really like the setting and the words you employed in developing this unique Quatrain. Very well-done as always Art!! I always expect no less from you!! Best Christmas Wishes from Ingrid and me. Gary
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Date: 12/11/2017 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Arthur with this wonderful Quatrain, enjoyed.
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Date: 12/9/2017 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on having your heartfelt poem honored for POTD Arthur!
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Date: 12/9/2017 7:05:00 AM
Enjoyed your lovely poem Arthur...All the best to you and yours
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Date: 12/8/2017 8:06:00 PM
Arthur, congratulations on POTD honors with your excellent poetic piece. Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:37:00 PM
Arthur, I enjoyed this wonderful piece of poetry, congrats on POTD.
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Date: 12/8/2017 5:46:00 PM
You are so kind, my friend, a piece of my heart you have. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:25:00 PM
A clever poem, Arthur: Congratulations!
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:25:00 PM
I very cute, but a sincere poem, Arthur! I enjoyed reading it and congratulate you for receiving a well-deserved the Poem of the Day honor! Sandra
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:39:00 PM
How funny and cute. I want a peace for the mind and kind for the hear :) congrats on potd, Arthur!
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Date: 12/8/2017 10:18:00 AM
Back with congratulations :) xomo!
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:49:00 AM
Cool poem, Arthur. Go seek for the piece of the puzzle that's missing ... Completeness, that is why you want it. Kudos on POTD. A lovely poem. Love and more love always.
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:36:00 AM
A piece of Art that comes straight from the heart. That's sweeter than anything made with sugar.
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:32:00 AM
Love it. You are so clever. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/8/2017 8:58:00 AM
This is so cute, I love it. Congrats on your POTD.
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:55:00 AM
awwww loved it. it made me smile
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:46:00 AM
We all want a piece of the pie!...Congrats on potd Arthur
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:23:00 AM
- Sounds delicious ... :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:59:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Arthur. It was fun to begin my day with your poem. Hope you get your peace of mind :)
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Date: 12/7/2017 9:42:00 PM
Sweet :) I'll take a piece! <3
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Date: 12/7/2017 7:19:00 PM
Nice piece of poetry, Art! For contest?
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Date: 12/7/2017 5:07:00 PM
Ha ha this is great Arthur! Not what i was expecting. It is a nice surprise. If you have leftovers of any of those pieces let me know.
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Date: 12/7/2017 4:04:00 PM
This is so darn funny, I want a piece of your humourous muse as mine is still on a cruise and also some of that cake and pie lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2017 2:54:00 PM
Peace comes from the heart...I like your take for the contest.
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Date: 12/9/2017 12:56:00 AM
thanks Tim, no contest! LOL True peace wins all the time!