I Wandered Lonely As a Tramp

"I wandered lonely as a cloud"--- By William Wordsworth

I wandered lonely as a tramp, Far, far away from all human habitats Away from all prying eyes Following the bent Of my vagrant inclination; Into Nature’s sylvan pockets To places studded with trees To the tranquil bosom of the woods Onto the heights of bald headed hills Where shrubs struggle to strike root From the cleft of rocks and ledges Where in hollows, wild bushes grow in clusters To watch the shreds of hovering mist To gaze upon piles of sailing clouds To shout loud and whistle long And to listen to the hills Mimicking my own sound There I will hop and jump, Like a sprightly forest fawn, As I don’t fear Either the silently gliding streams, Or the clump of swaying trees, The host of wild flowers, Or the monstrous mossy rocks, Either the birds or the beasts Never will they watch my cranky pranks And call me a loony As here my own men might do! September 19, 2022 Written for the contest, I Wandered Lonely As _ Challenge Sponsor, Natasha L Scragg Judged on 9/24/2022
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Gorelick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved POTD! Robert
Kauffman Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Valsa, I smile at your "cranky pranks" away from judgmental eyes where you can "hop," and "jump" without fear in the pure joy of life surrounded by our creators amazing jubilee of mountains, streams, forests and meadows not as a hobo but as an explorer "trampin'" through the fields of life. Congratulations on your POTD! A wonderful recognition of your poetic talent. Blessings my sweet friend.
George Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 6:45 PM
'To be away from judgemental eyes'.... ! Sam, you have plumbed into the true spirit of the poem and got its crux. Your comments are so insightful, dear friend. They give me a real 'kick'. Nature is my inspiration and where else can we act as free as we wish. We feel the greatest freedom when we are sure that no body is looking around. Thank you dear Sam.
Meadows Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 11:53 PM
A lovely poem about being surrounded by nature. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
George Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:54 AM
Thanks a lot Jeanette !
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:53 PM
oh and it's potd?? So deserving . Congrats
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:18 PM
Thanks a lot friend !
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:52 PM
this is fantastic writing, Valsa. I was thinking we had to use a particular rhyme scheme, but if not, THIS one should be a sure win!
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:18 PM
Rhyme scheme is not insisted upon. So I didn't bother as it needs extra effort ! Thank you dear Andrea !
Nicole Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:54 PM
"I wandered into Nature’s sylvan pockets." Such a wonderful place to dwell, where there is peace and where the wildflowers bloom. Serenity overtakes loneliness, and that's how it should be. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Valsa, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Once in a while, a journey into the hidden pockets of Nature can be exciting and rewarding ! Thanks a lot Brandy !
Delaney Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:42 PM
Congratulatiions. Valsa on POTD. Your lonely tramp sounds quite content with his life. Best. SuZ
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:15 PM
Yes, indeed ! Thanks a lot Suzanne !
May Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:41 PM
Congrats on POTD Valsa, Nicely done
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:14 PM
Joseph, you are quite kind. Thank you !
Kitchin Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:32 PM
Valsa, well penned, congratulations on POTD!
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Thanks a lot Tania .....
Anaya Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on POTD Valsa George!!! Poetry at it's best. There is a place for many a recluse, then there are those who think they want to live off the grid. Let's just hope he is a mendican and not a mendican't. ;)
George Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Thanks a lot Anaya for your lovely comment !
Lawrence Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Valsa, I loved taking this journey with you into beautiful nature with this lonely soul. Great imagery. Hugs to you and congratulations on POTD ! Susan :)
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:12 PM
Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed the poem. Have a lovely weekend Susan
Slaughter Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Valsa, this sounds like a splendiferous outing...even without companionship. BOL in the contest, and congrats on POTD.
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Thank you for your Best wishes and congratulations Jim
Roper Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:46 AM
Wonderful verse, Valsa, congratulations on POTD.
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Thank you very much Eve
Hankins Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 8:47 AM
So nicely done, Valsa! Congratulations!
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thanks a lot dear Milton !
Baker Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Back to say congratulations on your POTD, Valsa. Yeah! Enjoy your special day! Bill
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Bill, I remember you had 'faved' my poem. Thanks a lot dear friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:26 AM
A 'woodland sprite' you are, Valsa! Congrats on POTD. Fabulous! Forests and Trees, Gershon
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:09 AM
Woodland Sprite..... ! I like it. Thaks a lot dear Gershon
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor with this stunning write Valsa! Linda
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Thanks a lot dear Linda !
Tor Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations Valsa well done. So glad for you receiving POTD. Enjoy your recognition Dear it is well deserved...
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet friend, Michael
Lawless Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:24 AM
Puts mean mind of the statement "Dance as if no one is watching". The trees don't judge and the wind embraces all. Beautifully done Valsa.
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Yes, the trees will never judge nor the hills and dales frown . That way we are free like the wind in Nature ! Thanks a lot John.
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 4:49 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Valsa. Enjoy your day.
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Thanks once again for your appreciation dear Vijay.
Calasibetta Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 4:44 AM
So beautifully done! Congratulations on your POTD! :)Paulette
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:03 AM
Thanks a lot dear Paulette!
Kyser Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 4:33 AM
Terrific. This "Wandered Lonely" contest has really produced some great work!
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:02 AM
Glad you liked it Jeff. I know your standards are pretty high. Thanks a lot!
Poet Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Back with Congratulations on a very well deserved POTD, Valsa. Enjoy your honor
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:00 AM
You never fail in congratulating me. Thank you dear Lasaad !
Gentile Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Valsa, you have penned a beautiful journey that so many can relate to! congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:01 AM
Thanks a lot Mike. Glad for your Congratulations....
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September 21, 2022 at 3:08 AM
Wonderful poetry Valsa, the freedom of a tramp on the road to anywhere must be wonderful. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:00 AM
Thank you so much Belle for your kind visit an comment !
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