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I Wandered Lonely As a Leaf

I wandered lonely as a fluttering leaf, twirling, swirling, whirling in the air, when I found a lass weeping in grief, she was the sweetest, gentle and fair, wondered what made her weep so sad, I wished I knew how to make her glad. . she was the most beautiful maiden I ever saw but her blue eyes were full of tears, I wanted to caress her cheeks - she was in awe, did she miss her beloved away for many years! wished I could take her grief away, she shouldn't be crying day after day! I floated like a lonely sail-boat in the sea, I glided in the garden, like a butterfly, the lovely maiden didn't see me, I wafted light among the trees high. Dear Lass, your beloved will return soon, you will find his ardent messages in stars and moon. September 19, 2022 I Wandered Lonely As...Challenge Poetry contest Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg Inspired by William Wordsworth's "Daffodils" (same rhyme scheme)

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Date: 9/23/2022 1:37:00 AM
Beautifully done Mala! A falling leaf, that denotes end of life, has feelings for someone suffering the pangs of separation! If you entered this in the contest, it should do well! I like this better than the sailboat, although both are good! All the best in the contest!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/23/2022 7:32:00 AM
Delighted to see you back, Krish! Where were you for so long! Glad you liked this one, unfortunately I submitted the other one for the contest. Thank you for the uplifting comments.
Date: 9/21/2022 8:41:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Very good one like the writing of Wordsworth. Sara
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/23/2022 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. Your comment inspire me. I wrote another poem in the same format, and submitted that one for contest. Really appreciate your sweet words.
Date: 9/19/2022 9:31:00 PM
Lovely poem, beautiful and sweetly rhyming ! All the best in the contest!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/20/2022 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Your comment is uplifting and inspiring.
Date: 9/19/2022 7:39:00 PM
An empathetic leaf! Enjoyed this beautifully crafted poem, Mala
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/20/2022 4:39:00 AM
Dear Seeker, Thank you for your inspiring comment. It made my day.

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