I Think That I Shall Pen a Tome

I think that I shall pen a tome
an ink stained wandering lengthy poem
that questions all that is and ain’t
that holds you still like drying paint

A brood of words undisciplined
gutted fish no longer finned
thrashing on the sands of time
mouths agape in search for rhyme

I must confess I love the drama
so shun the use of every comma
and periods that single dot
an endless sentence never sought

to break its wave upon the beach
unveiling useless parts of speech
to drop a line and without fail
use the Thesaurus as its bail

yet I must cut this tome quite short
as I am running out of thought
and stories long and endless seem
to lure me to another dream

thus I apologize to those who muster
all their thoughts into a cluster
serve them to us on full platters
to let us know poetry matters

John G. Lawless
©7/26/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 10:28 AM
John, I adore the light-hearted spirit and creative imagery of your poem. Great rhythm and rhymes frame your verses beautifully. Congratulations for POTD honors. A wonderful and worthy choice. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
George Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 2:55 AM
There is a spark of humor amid these weighty thoughts ! Poetry writing is not a thing quite easy. We may plan to write a tome, but may have to cut short abruptly as we run out of thoughts ! Enjoyed reading this poem presented in a light vein ! Congratulations John on your POTD
Tor Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 9:32 PM
A very clever and thought out truth about what it is like to write Poetry. I can relate to this wonderful Poetry of yours John. Made me smile to read. A big congratulations for your fine effort in this magnificent creation. A favorite for me...
Kitchin Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:28 PM
A fun one, John, congratulations on POTD!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:18 PM
I loved your clever poem John. It brought a big smile to my face. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! Blessings xxoo
Wolf Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:08 PM
They told me that I can't swallow Tome in one bite. No, no. Sorry. That was 'Rome!' Good going, John. Congrats on POTD!
La France Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 3:31 PM
John, I love your poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Calasibetta Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your POTD that really strikes a chord of sheer delight. Your creativity is so inspiring. :)Paulette
Nicole Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 12:16 PM
I enjoyed reading this- "ink stained tome (I mean poem) of words undisciplined." This is beyond, cute and clever, it is very creative. I like the way you think, and the way you write. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Slaughter Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 11:04 AM
I almost didn't stop by PS today, but after reading this thoroughly delightful piece, I'm so glad I did. Kudos, John, and BTW, an excellent selection for POTD...POTW...POTM...POTY...etc....
Kauffman Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Ah, the mischief of your inner child at play again, John! Delightful! Congratulations on your POTD. Had a fun romp through your tome! All the best. Blessings!
May Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Words bailed out by the Theasaurus. Congrats on POTD
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations John on a well combobulated POTD, creative poetry indeed, cheers David
Kyser Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 8:38 AM
I’d like to say that in the zone I’m soaring high in the unknown Instead I’m browsing rhyming words for orange that aren’t contrived, absurd
Hankins Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Ah, John, this is such a winner and so delightful to read. Many congratulations on your well-deserved P.O.T.D. Sorry I missed it somewhere along the way!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun/creative write. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Raven Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Hi John, congratulations on your Poem Of the day honour, well deserved with this creative piece. A fun write, my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday ..... Mike.
Sands Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations for POTD John. Enjoyed :)
Logan Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:42 AM
John, your lines are filled with unique imagery. I smiled thinking about the fish thrashing on the sand, searching for a rhyme. I am of fan of no punction in many poems. Sometimes it detracts from the message. I congratulate you for having written the POTD.
Jayasankar Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:15 AM
Very creative John... interesting write... enjoyed reading... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani
Fowler Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Lovely, fun, creative, and more. I very much enjoyed this John. Congratulations on POTD! Linda
Baker Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, John. It was funn to read and actually flowed quite well. Bill
Gentile Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:12 AM
What a fun read John! I enjoyed it beginning to end (without punctuation) Congratulations on your POTD honors!!
Lawless Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:33 AM
there is a bit of danger in running grammatical red lights.....but......then again....it could be used as a breathing exercise
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:49 AM
Who needs rules?, they're only guidelines anyway lol. Congrats John on the honour of POTD. Tom
Lawless Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:30 AM
at the YMCA on Huntington Ave in Boston the rules for the pool were NO RUNNING, JUMPING OR DIVING FROM THE BALCONY....and there was a balcony
M  Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 1:23 AM
Congratulations John on POTD….well done! Debx
Lawless Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:34 AM
thanks for stopping by....and staying to read the tome
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