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I, the Lover

Mind if I tell you, honestly, I’m really not Into raucous voices and fists raised in anger Who tear down rather than build up …. Call me a lover of what is right and good, Focusing not on negativity, destruction, or even change! I revel in the beautiful things that surround me The sunshine, the flowers, the birds that serenade The smile of the newborn, happy laughter, And good writing … poems that tell a compelling story Sharing the extraordinary someone else has experienced Written in simple terms; I love to travel, to learn There are other fine people in other parts of the world Whose culture is rich, perhaps, even richer than our own Still, I love my country. My America! America, my home. Love triumphs over hate, meanness, and derision, And I want to leave this world knowing I have triumphed! HONORABLE MENTION "8 Only - Write What Inspires" November 9, 2021 All Poetry written November 2, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/3/2021 10:09:00 AM

This is so positive and full of optimism and hope. "I revel in the beautiful things that surround me The sunshine, the flowers, the birds that serenade The smile of the newborn, happy laughter, And good writing … poems that tell a compelling story" An inspiration!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/3/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful, kind affirmation, Caren. I am now through with this series sharing more of who I am and what I believe. I enjoyed writing these. The last one is I, the Libertarian.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/2/2021 8:48:00 PM

Dear Milton, I revel in the potent expression of your inspiring poem and relish the artistry of your triumphant pen in melding beauty and passion so seamlessly. Spirited and beautiful soul-baring, my friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/3/2021 8:49:00 AM

Susan, your lovely thoughts and expressions are poetry in themselves. I always love reading your comments. I hope you are having a wonderful, productive week. Thanks so much.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/2/2021 6:52:00 PM

Words of inspiration, Milton. You said everything that needed to be said. Some people like to argue they seem to get aroused by it, I turn my back on those. My artwork reflects the love of nature my poetry does to.Enjoyed reading

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 7:00:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for your thoughts. This little series of Free Verse poems came about when I saw a contest on our philosophy of life. I couldn't condense it all for a contest, so I decided to share in these poems. I appreciate your kind read and affirmation.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/2/2021 6:00:00 PM

Good, Great, and Superb, Milt. We all can and should rise above the 'raucous roar.' Inspirational words of wisdom. Thanks, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 6:05:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon. I really appreciate your comment. By the way, I am working on the pope poem (just between you and me).

Terry Flood

Date: 11/2/2021 5:30:00 PM

Aside from not being American… if I were inclined to write about the ‘inside’ stuff, I could have easily asked myself the question… when the hell did I write this? A very nice write indeed, Milt. Like it lots [and I really don’t do free verse!] Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 5:34:00 PM

Thanks, Terry, for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your affirmation.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/2/2021 3:55:00 PM

Some people are not aware of the beauty that surrounds us. The same people do not give any thought to integrity,fairness or morals of any sort. Who are the fortunate ones?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 5:30:00 PM

Thanks, Shirley, for your warm and affirmative thoughts on my poem. I should think that those who appreciate beauty have a head-start on the good life.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/2/2021 3:34:00 PM

A very emotional write from your heart Milton, from your verse you are passionate about life. Even now you have triumphed. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 5:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom, for your always encouraging words. I appreciate you.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/2/2021 12:13:00 PM

Like religion, government is dedicated to doing people out of their property "for the common good", but I have certainly enjoyed watching people succeed in life despite the odds!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2021 12:22:00 PM

I thank you, Rico, for your thought-provoking comments. I always enjoying reading what Rico has to say. My response to this one is, "Me too!"