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I Swear I Didnt Know That Aggravated Assault Was Relaxing For Zeroes

profanity profanity banned banned band. ?whyyyyyyyyyyyy? curse this fragile world unto oblivion whilst dangerous beehives buzz buzz bus. outrageous titles of poems that we will not comment reflect poorly upon poetry and poemtry alike yet unlike misbehaving decanters we mix laziness with rancid pleasure. but immobile conkers jump with a swear f----words c---words so unbecoming of a modern world. this may be why poetry deadens. buried below lifted up dropped. END.

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Date: 3/28/2010 9:25:00 PM
Once in a while, though...a nice good smack with a 4 letter word is perfect for the mood of the writing. Why poetry deadens? No- it is in the WAY the words are used, not what words are used- that deadens the writing.
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Date: 2/24/2010 8:15:00 AM
I agree... There are other words to express curse words that pass the same meaning.... Good work my friend....:JP]
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