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I Started a Joke

My joke began to evaporate Before the laughter came Never try to tempt the hand of fate You'll only have yourself to blame Lost in a world of make belief Where jokes return without a chuckle And fate delivers a punch line of grief As your knees begin to buckle There is no magic in the moonlight When the joke is now on you It's only tears you will invite As the laughter makes you blue - 11-21-17 Contest: I Started a Joke Sponsor: Maria Williams

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Date: 12/1/2017 8:31:00 PM
by the way I finally did one on this theme, but yours is still better!!
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Date: 11/27/2017 6:01:00 AM
Nicely penned my friend...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:18:00 AM
I like your poems.. I will definitely read more of your poem
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:12:00 PM
Hey, I figured out how to do mine. Just not posted yet! This sure is a popular theme with folks!!
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Date: 11/26/2017 6:41:00 AM
I like your style, I am going to read more of your work---this is a very good attempt at a difficult task--- I'm adding you to my fav's Take care my friend
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:33:00 PM
You did this very well. STILL I do not know how the heck to approach this one.
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Date: 11/24/2017 11:25:00 AM
Joseph, excellent poem for the contest, a winner to me !
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Date: 11/23/2017 3:17:00 AM
Excellent and wonderful write. Very creative. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/23/2017 1:01:00 AM
nice piece.
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Date: 11/22/2017 6:05:00 PM
Hello Jos.eph good luck in the contest. I have enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/21/2017 10:36:00 PM
You have some wonderfully creative lines in this piece Joseph! I hope it does really well in the contest. I thought it was brilliant! : )
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:54:00 PM
Great and wonderful poem!
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:32:00 PM
Very nice but a little sad too.
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:26:00 PM
Hi Joseph, I completely get what you are saying, we sometimes try to find laughter through our trials and bounders, but the strong holds of life over takes us. When the laughter comes yet still does the tears.
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:04:00 PM
Nice rhyming. Tearfully great!
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Date: 11/21/2017 4:35:00 PM
This is a superb take on this joke theme, Joseph. Great ending, too. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/21/2017 4:26:00 PM
Fantastic poem for the contest Jospeh and best of luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:20:00 AM
Well written as always--best for a win, Joseph!
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Date: 11/21/2017 6:47:00 AM
Wonderful lines, Joseph:)
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Date: 11/21/2017 6:32:00 AM
This is a great poem for the contest Joseph. Well done :)
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Date: 11/21/2017 12:12:00 AM
A great write Joseph!
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