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Disaffection

Your vibrant smile haunts me every now and then Sashaying strut like a peacock is how I remember you How come I recall only good things about you? In my present condition, I'm morbidly disaffected Clear blue skies look to be dull grayish In my pond of friends, I thrash about like a dying goldfish Ever since we split, we remain a gossip item The loss of your personal connection has filled me with such disaffection I loathe sleep, being awake zombies me Trundling off to work each day in a coal miner way So dark, deep down in the tunnel of my heart Three weeks without a shave, hollow nights of delta blues lullabies in a den of flashing neon lights Disaffection has taken hold of me Remembering your last words; they rattle around in my head, trapped in the throes of misery

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Date: 3/30/2017 1:34:00 PM
Sashaying strut like a peacock ' wow awesomely phrased that and the rest of the poem wry musing so poetically and in novel artsy style of rendering emotions as the lost love is recalled.bex lovers do haunt , as I have known from much such observation . Kudos. Soo nice to read from your pen again. Hoping u will too u will too my latest.
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Date: 3/29/2017 12:24:00 PM
Freddie , This poem is incredible. It brings the reader right into it and the depth of feelings. Excellent writing :)
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