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Disaffection


Your vibrant smile
haunts me every now and then
Sashaying strut like a peacock
is how I remember you
How come I recall only good things about you?
In my present condition,
I'm morbidly disaffected
Clear blue skies look to be dull grayish
In my pond of friends,
I thrash about like a dying goldfish
Ever since we split,
we remain a gossip item
The loss of your personal connection
has filled me with such disaffection
I loathe sleep,
being awake zombies me
Trundling off to work each day
in a coal miner way
So dark,
deep down in the tunnel
of my heart
Three weeks without a shave,
hollow nights of delta blues lullabies
in a den of flashing neon lights
Disaffection
has taken hold of me
Remembering your last words;
they rattle around in my head,
trapped in the throes of misery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/30/2017 1:34:00 PM
Sashaying strut like a peacock ' wow awesomely phrased that and the rest of the poem wry musing so poetically and in novel artsy style of rendering emotions as the lost love is recalled.bex lovers do haunt , as I have known from much such observation . Kudos. Soo nice to read from your pen again. Hoping u will too u will too my latest.
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Date: 3/29/2017 12:24:00 PM
Freddie , This poem is incredible. It brings the reader right into it and the depth of feelings. Excellent writing :)
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