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I Should Have Seen It Coming

I should have seen it coming – but more often the obvious is yet only viewed through a cloak of personal affections and ignorance – I should have seen it coming but the heart is a clown a camp of favorite characters the real covered-over beneath enticing glitter of circus-tents and performance dreams I should have seen it coming but light and dark are only the messengers of vision love and hate from the dugout of far deeper passions And what if one did see it coming? Is not blindness the free-will choice of a spirit-soul, God having sent us to earth oblivious His methods and reasons giving us literature and faith in their stead... Should we think and reason better than our Maker? Nay!~ Love, needs no vision, outside itself – Its own omnipotence and divine dissolution.... (Feb, 2 – For the I Shoulda Seen It Comin' Poetry Contest of John Lawless)

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Date: 2/4/2023 2:51:00 AM
With a crystal ball to see the outcome before made the choice, I some how dont think it would assist with a perfect life. The way it happens is the way it was meant to be, he has a reason for everything, even if we are blind to it at the time. An intuitive writing Joe, constructed perfectly.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2023 6:35:00 AM
The perfection of being perfectly imperfect -- His plan. Thank you, my friend. A very wise and thoughtful response.
Date: 2/3/2023 8:29:00 PM
A beautiful poem. We often exclaim after something unfortunate happens... "We should have seen it coming". But it is futile to make such a lamentation. God has a plan and everything will work according to his scheme. We are just instruments in His hands ! Your poem is profound and thought provoking, dear Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2023 6:37:00 AM
For sure, trust in destiny, and that nothing is entirely random outside our understanding. Mortals respond to cause and effect...and divine when through faith to finally rise above and celebrate spiritual/soulful freedom.
Date: 2/3/2023 4:32:00 PM
A great read!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/4/2023 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Kim; blessings my friend.
Date: 2/3/2023 10:06:00 AM
Many are misguided with free will. The reality is that we can only choose between good and other good. Evil is not a choice.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/3/2023 10:09:00 AM
Absolutely! When truly free, Good is always the choice.

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