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I Shall Write of It

A day in my life, I shall write of it The day my loving sainted mother died T'will not be your commonplace death obit But about the copious tears I cried. Raging anguish engulfed me from inside An anger seemingly to me unfit I could neither control nor set aside A day in my life, I shall write of it. I found a mourning place where I could sit Searching out secret solitude, I tried To find a special place where I would fit The day my loving sainted mother died. It seemed like no matter how hard I tried The gushing salty tears would never quit My grief overpowered my angry pride T’will not be your commonplace death obit. Sixty-four years have passed, I will admit, Mother has continued to be my guide I recall that day such a little bit But about the copious tears I cried. I shall write of it. April 25, 2021 The Rondeau Redouble (Modified) by Constance La France, an inspiration for this poem

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Date: 4/26/2021 7:49:00 AM
The honesty of this made me so joyful! "Sixty-four years have passed, I will admit, Mother has continued to be my guide " I love this!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/26/2021 9:37:00 AM
She is always with me, Caren, just as I believe all of those who love us who have gone on before are watching over us. I can't tell you the number of times Mom has intervened on my behalf, and the beautiful part was I knew it was she who rescued me!
Date: 4/25/2021 7:06:00 PM
Gosh, you were so young, Milt. No wonder you were so angry, for your young mom as well as for yourself. Life sure wasn't fair there. Sigh, Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/25/2021 8:49:00 PM
Yeah, I lost my 42-year-old mother at the tender age of 15. I was so angry...blaming God, etc. I wrote a poem somewhere on here about her appearing to me in a "vision." It changed my way of thinking about the hereafter. I probably will write more on that theme because it "haunts" me still. Thanks for your kind comment.
Date: 4/25/2021 11:03:00 AM
Ah, losing a mother is the moment we realize we have an angel pining for us from heaven. I am sure she was so proud of you and still is, Theres much love in this Milton, much love :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/25/2021 11:53:00 AM
She was the most loving, caring person I ever knew, Mystic Rose Rose, and lost her physical presence when I was fifteen years old. I never lost her spirit or her presence in my life. Yes, much love here.

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