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An Amazing Artist - Sam Robson, aka LymphomaLass
This dear soul kindly gave permission for use of her painting, "Flourish".
It, among others showcasing her amazing talent, may be found at:
https://www.redbubble.com/shop/ap/155092179

I Shall Not Fall

Within my depths ancient murmurs arise. As had Phoenix, I had burned to ashes. Yet I rise to strew the day with surprise as I flourish in brilliantine flashes. I am boisterous and blatantly loud in voice and also in buff appearance. Gregarious and bold, merging from cloud, I fold my wings in show of forbearance. My wings beat chill that draws color to fore, irrefutably majestic and grand. My winds blow promise not seen heretofore as I spread my majesty o'er the land. I am applauded as glorious Fall but I shall not - I shall rise above all!
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George Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Your comparison of Fall to the phoenix bird seems so appropriate. You have indeed approached the yellowing and withering of trees not as a sign of decay, but as an indication of rebirth. Well done Linda!
Fowler Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thank you dear Valsa, a rebirth, celebration of earth's cycle of life. A beautiful season. Thank you for your thoughtful comments. :)
Lawrence Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 8:45 AM
So powerful Linda ! Glorious and quite magnificent in its strength. Love ! Hugs dear. blessings, Susan :)
Fowler Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 11:52 AM
I am so appreciative of your visit and positive comments Susan. Thank you!! hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 1:03 AM
Splendid sonnet. Leaves fall only to grow again, Blessings
Fowler Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Hello dear Victor. So glad to see you. Thank you for commenting on my sonnet. :)
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