I Send This To You and the Universe

It was a very long time
When I was young living 
With a cold uncaring family and man
Working hard feeling the darkness moving in
With a mentally half brother, another a Viet Nam vet
A father who was just barely there, 
A mother who did not care

And I found someone  in San Francisco
A therapist, a man well known
Dealing with violence  and crime
In our country and others 
But he still listened to me 
Unsure that I married a man 
Who I began to suspect 
Was neither loving or kind
And slowly I knew my family
Was truly the same

And with each week 
He listened and I talked 
In the presence of such a kind
Knowing man who spent his time
Dealing with sad sick events and people
Difficult places complex deaths and police
Sitting with those who needed health

And with time I knew that those
People angry and cold were my family too 
In time I finally had to leave for work
Going to the south, saying farewell
I am not sure I left him knowing how
Good he had been to me and if I thanked
Him as I should, now he is gone,
I knew what an incredible man he had been 
Gone now from illness
Still I wanted to say into the sky
That you had helped me and let
Me begin to connect and grow with 
Another therapist later who helped me too
Now I am sending from my heart
This whisper to the universe and you
A very special thank you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/23/2023 3:41:00 PM
What a beautiful thank you tribute, Linda.
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Date: 6/29/2023 9:56:00 AM
WOW!!! "I seen this to You and the Universe" is a powerful write/story. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful day...................
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Linda Milgate
Date: 6/30/2023 1:59:00 PM
thank you, boy, meant send not seen, why I do less!!! take care
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