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I See the Sky

Within your eyes I see the sky reflected in a shade of blue Flowers bloom for spring is nigh And all things are made new I see the sky within your eyes As the summer breeze does sigh the ballet of butterflies as they go floating by Within your eyes I see the sky As leaves begin to fly A melancholy rain does fall As autumn comes to call I see the sky within your eyes in winter skies of gray But sometimes I see butterflies When I recall those summer days -- 5-26-18 Sky Contest Anthony Slausen

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Date: 6/14/2018 12:53:00 PM
Joseph, this is beautiful! Congratulations on your win! A fave.
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Date: 6/9/2018 9:32:00 PM
Lovely, Joseph. Congrats on your much deserved win.
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Date: 6/9/2018 5:26:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win, Joseph ... well-done!
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Date: 5/28/2018 6:22:00 AM
What a nice poem to read this morning. Thanks for sharing. -JWE
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Date: 5/28/2018 5:39:00 AM
lovely metaphors grace this mellow poem as it lift me up to be caressed by your sky, joseph... huggs
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Date: 5/27/2018 5:57:00 AM
Joseph, you do these sort of love themes so well, and this is no exception, well done and best of luck ~
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Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2018 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings
Date: 5/26/2018 9:07:00 PM
Hi Joseph, This is a good take on the contest theme. It looks beautiful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest;-) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2018 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 5/26/2018 10:52:00 AM
beautiful, Joseph. Love this.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 5/26/2018 8:26:00 AM
Simply beautiful..
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Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Silent One
Date: 5/26/2018 8:08:00 AM
A beautiful, flowing poem Joseph. Well expressed :)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 5/26/2018 7:12:00 AM
Lyrical, rhythmic, and simply beautiful ..well crafted poem, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Vijay

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