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I See Easter Is On the Horizon

Good things will grow, from planting healthy seeds, Bad things develop, when we start to pay no heed, Grains grew and flourished, filling up our fields, Why oh why, did we cut down all the trees, To move giant statues, in honor of our dead, We needed so much wood, to build rollers and sleds, Competition grew between us, megalomania spread, Statues got bigger, along with enormous heads. Soil started to vanish, every time it rained, No trees to absorb, through porous rock it drained, Harvests failed, our children starved in vain, Battles broke out, opposing clans where blamed. Hard times came upon us, diseases ensued, Cannibals emerged, in search of meaty food, Sought solace in our statues, they remained unmoved, Gaze fixated on the ocean, behind landscape in denude. Easter Island remains a lesson, not to trust mankind, A microcosm of our planet, when nature’s undermined, Even as I write this poem, earth’s being redesigned, Chimneys our new statues, spewing filth into the clime. Ice sheets are melting, forests are burning wild, Sea levels rising, with each and every tide, Population’s growing, while reserves are in decline, Will we heed the warnings, of course when out of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/2/2021 3:25:00 PM
David, congratulations on your honorable in Carolyn's contest _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/2/2021 11:26:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I m delighted with the HM considering I messed up on the rules cheers David
Date: 3/1/2021 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. This week I saw a TV show about Easter Island. It was a great show just like your write. Have a blessed day....................
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/1/2021 3:06:00 PM
Heya Paula, thank you for popping in, I messed up on the rules, my poem was way to long, I never seen the 14 line limit, but was delighted with the HM for my effort, cheers David
Date: 3/1/2021 11:51:00 AM
I love your description of the Easter Island natives, David. The poem just exceeded the limit of 14 lines by more than a few lines. Congratulations on an HM. Best wishes, Carolyn
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/1/2021 12:02:00 PM
Heya Carolyn; Ha leave it to me, not to read all the rules I don’t think I could’ve left out a stanza or two, even if I was aware, but hey it was my fault, I’m delighted you enjoyed reading my poem and gave it an honorable mention, cheers David
Date: 8/28/2020 1:54:00 PM
Easter and Christmas Island David .To quote the american vernacular , No harm no foul Its our cfc cans responsible for destroying the ozone layer and fossil fuel pollution for global warming. Not years of nuclear testing and rockets punching holes in the atmosphere I just wrote a poem especially for you my mate. Ive just discovered the best thing since sliced bread And the antidote for it
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/6/2020 3:30:00 PM
It’s a work in progress Christopher if I can nail a real good poem some day I’ll be happy, You’ve wrote several top drawer poems but I think your best is still to come, and best of luck you deserve it cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/4/2020 11:37:00 AM
Never a truer word said David. I really am as mad as a hatter. Ive even got the hat and t-shirt to prove it and doctors certificate. Cheers my friend long may you write and inspire others. The sadest thing on this site for me is the great poets who are underead and under valued such as yourself and a few others i can think of
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/28/2020 2:31:00 PM
Your mad as a hatter Christopher, but a creative one, I’m just happy someone’s reading my stuff and if influenced by it even better, I appreciate your gesture but am honestly not worthy cheers David
Date: 8/28/2020 4:43:00 AM
...”of course when out of time.” sums it up perfectly. If only this fabulous write was fiction. xomo
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/28/2020 4:56:00 AM
Thank you so much super Mo, A microcosm a trial run an experiment, does not matter the resulting tragedy is being ignored, cheers David

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