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I See Beyond the Stars

I see beyond the stars at night. A peaceful place of delight, Perhaps I’ll see my mother there. Fly with wings without a care, With old friends I can unite. Filled with love they never fight, In a place, pure and white. People I know are unaware, I see beyond the stars. Don’t know why I have this sight, See this glitter, oh so bright. It glows and drifts everywhere, Beautiful clouds of magical air, How omniscient… the celestial light, I see beyond the stars. Entry for “I See Beyond......” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Paula Swanson

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Date: 12/27/2011 8:19:00 PM
Great way to do the contest, Grey and GREAT win. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:58:00 PM
Congrats on your fine placement in the contest...You did well with this difficult form..at least it is for me. BG
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Date: 12/27/2011 1:40:00 PM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:38:00 AM
You wrote a "heavenly" rondeau, Greg. It is beautiful. Congrats on this 3rd place win. A very competitive contest. Great job! Happy New Year, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2011 10:41:00 PM
I hope to someday be able to see beyond the stars also Greg. Congratulations
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on a big win with your thoughtful poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:11:00 PM
Greg congrats on your win, great..David
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Date: 12/21/2011 7:29:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:47:00 PM
Greg, you have decently descriptive wording and appropriate rhyming throughout this entry. Paula should appreciate this one for her contest.
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