I See Beyond

I see beyond the crosses In the snow covered field Like soldiers in formation For whom our hearts aren't healed I see beyond the sacrifice Of those that gave their life And with their faith to guide them Left a husband, child, or wife I see beyond the caisson That a single stallion drays Committing one more hero Feel the pain their loss conveys I see beyond the sadness Carried by the bugles trill The sense of loss hangs heavy As if the earth stood still I see beyond the honor guard And their shots fired in salute A tribute to their brother Who before them now lays mute I see beyond all these things With my heart if not my eye But what I cannot see beyond Is why they had to die
Written for the "I See Beyond" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/1/2012 10:53:00 AM
well deserving of your win! a beautifully written and perfectly rhymed poem.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/1/2012 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Ilene
Date: 12/29/2011 11:08:00 AM
oh, wow... poignant and tender.. congrats on your top win, bob!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/29/2011 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Nette
Date: 12/27/2011 8:17:00 PM
Hey, lookie there. I CALLED IT!!! Congrats, you chart topper you.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 10:07:00 PM
You sure did. I'm going to let you call all my poems:)
Date: 12/27/2011 7:55:00 PM
Sorry Im late in giving you a big hurrah for this outstanding poem..the ending is perfect. BG
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Barbara. I appreciate that
Date: 12/27/2011 3:41:00 PM
Bob, an absolutely amazing poem, and a well deserved win of 1st place. I just love the last two lines.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Greg. Much appreciated
Date: 12/27/2011 1:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Very emotive work..Sara
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Sara
Date: 12/27/2011 9:43:00 AM
Awesome poem, Bob, congratulations!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 11:54:00 AM
Appreciate that Denise
Date: 12/27/2011 6:21:00 AM
Fine and dexterous write,Bob.Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 8:20:00 AM
Many thanks Olusegun
Date: 12/27/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Bob x
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Mandy
Date: 12/27/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:00:00 AM
a very worthy offering, in my jaundiced sight, deserves a first, for we are cursed, to lose the best, it just don't feel, alright...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/27/2011 8:21:00 AM
Much appreciated Don
Date: 12/26/2011 9:16:00 PM
This is an epic write, Bob. I am completely in awe of your talent! My emotions run so deep regarding the sacrifices of our beloved Veterans.....Congrats on a super amazing win. All the best, Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/26/2011 10:13:00 PM
Very kind words Gwen. Thank you so much
Date: 12/26/2011 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations Bob :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/26/2011 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Jon
Date: 12/26/2011 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations. Very Good!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/26/2011 10:15:00 PM
Appreciate it Christopher
Date: 12/26/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your wonderful poem. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/26/2011 10:15:00 PM
I appreciate that very much Joyce
Date: 12/26/2011 4:08:00 PM
Bob many congrats on your win, this is undoubtably an outstanding win, hold your head up high..David
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/26/2011 10:16:00 PM
Thanks Dave. I will
Date: 12/25/2011 9:56:00 AM
this is outstanding. Wow, I agree with Kash. It's a chart topper!!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/25/2011 10:03:00 AM
Wow indeed. Thank you Andrea. Really makes my day.
Date: 12/24/2011 4:46:00 AM
A top charter here Bob!Love it!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/24/2011 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Kash
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