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I See

In your eyes I see the person I am becoming. For Rick's Quote Contest.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/6/2018 12:12:00 PM

A deep and thoughtful monoku Richard. Intriguing and wonderfully expressed. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/6/2018 3:17:00 PM

I agree that it could have different interpretations, which makes your write one to linger over, which I did... :))

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 3:11:00 PM

Thanks for commenting Susan. I like this one too because it can be taken many different ways.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/28/2016 8:48:00 AM

Amazing! :) Well done with this monoku. :) -JWE

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2016 9:43:00 AM

Thanks again JW. This one didn't make the grade for the contest but I like it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/10/2016 5:55:00 PM

Hello Richard, Your Monoku sounds like a winner to me. Good Luck!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/25/2016 4:41:00 AM

A lovely and meaningful monoku, Richard. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2016 8:41:00 AM

Thanks Paul.

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 9/24/2016 9:15:00 AM

A very deep and lovely quote Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/24/2016 12:29:00 PM

Thanks. ;0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2016 3:24:00 PM

this is so wonderful, Richard!! Can't wait to see who his winners are.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2016 8:25:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/17/2016 9:26:00 AM

very powerful line,Sir Richard. Reminds me of the Yanni soundtrack "In your Eyes."

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2016 9:43:00 AM

I am not familiar with that one.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/16/2016 12:24:00 AM

Beautiful, dear. Simply beautiful. Good luck in the contest. You may want to go back to your birthday blog...you have some belated greetings. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/16/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, I'll check it out.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/15/2016 12:10:00 PM

A very telling monoku. Deep for a single line.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2016 9:57:00 PM

Thanks Armand.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2016 3:10:00 AM

- A mirror image that says the truth, Richard - Great monoku - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise. Hugs Rick.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/15/2016 1:43:00 AM

Im sure you re gazing into some eyes that leave quite a good impression on you..Looking in your mirror and see your eyes..or in somebody elses eyes...Whoever..You are looking in the best direction. Re.yr earlier comment: I am doing fine dear friend, thankyou.My family ( parents etc passed through a turbelence of illnesses..but all on the mend:), Iam writing on a new site too...but ofcourse I still stop here to visit the wonderful poets I always held.so dearly.tp my heart.Thanks for asking.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2016 2:10:00 AM

Thanks for visiting, what site are you on?