I Saw You

I saw you in that toothless smile of the down on his luck stranger when I offered him my juicy pinkish ripe peach left over from my afternoon lunch oh how his smile shined so I saw you in that twinkle in my daughter's eye as I chased her around the park climbing up and down the slides across the wavering bridges through the tubes and tunnels playing a simple game of tag oh how those eyes twinkled with love I saw you in that couple walking on the sandy beach hand in hand under the setting sky the rich hues of yellow, orange, and red floating in the clouds up high oh how their passion radiated I saw you in that first lily of the spring opening up so fresh and new brightening up my garden each tepal trumpeting a treasured song oh how magnificent was it's sight I see you in all that's around in nature's beauty abound in kindness, in love, in angelic faces I see you in all of God's good graces I see you
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Gray Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 3:41 AM
Beautiful piece of writing Tim. I enjoyed this very much!.
Hons Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 1:29 AM
I really enjoyed reading this. Rated a 7...
Vaso Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on poem of the day,and well deserved, this was very touching indeed!
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 7:06 AM
Tim, I am late on this, but congratulations on your beautiful, touching poem being chosen as Poem of the Day! Sandra
Konos Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 11:53 AM
beautiful, there are no other words...
Fraser Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Delightful poetry Tim, a joy to read, and blessed with POTD also, nice, James :)
Enriquez Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Dear Tim: Well done. Congratulations on the POTD selection. All the best then, Leon.
Smith Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Thank you eveyone and thank you PS for this honour on my little poem : )
Yvonne Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Great poem, congratulations Tim your write being chosen the special one of the day!
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Back again to congratulate you for poem of the day. Well deserved hugs eve
Gorelick Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Congrats to you...it is a lovely piece. BG
Williams Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful. Needs no words.
Cabral Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 9:38 AM
I didn't just read this poem, I felt it. Great Job Tim!
Chircop Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Congrats..Timothu!!! I really love love loved this poem and Im s o happy tps loved it too..Hooray: )
Smith Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 7:13 PM
: )
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Your lovely poem brightened my morning, Tim. Congrats on being chosen TPOD!
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 4:33 AM
congrats on poem of the day Tim:-) Hugs jan xx
Taylor Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 3:53 PM
I love the tense change at the end! Great work!!! Can't wait to read more! <3 Tash
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 11:25 AM
- A beautiful poem, Tim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Paz Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Your poetry is sweet and impressing, Tim. You are able to give the english language a sound which is rarely met in the literature. You are a poet!
Das Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 8:07 AM
A beauty. ...A #7....
Nunez Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Aww, Tim...this simply beautiful! Such gentle write and awesome thought in each line. Loved it! Perfect 7! Hugs! Kim :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 3:09 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. ENjoyed reading it. Tfs
Ellison Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 9:43 PM
I am SO impressed Mr. Timothy! What a charming tender write! My apologies, I should visit more often!
Roper Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Tim, love you're the flow of your words with every poem you write. Blessings eve 7
Chircop Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 4:07 PM
So close to my heart are those people of the street..How I wish before I die to be able to offer then at least one room..and how I love to become a child again when kids are around.How I love the sandy beaches ,sunsets and Springs..Oh that Cala lily what a pure flower it is.How I love nature and all the sweet words that flow like a stream beneath the angel's wings. Speechless!! To my fvs.
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