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I Remember

You thrill me with your love never spoken though strong and so real I've come alive once more I am uplifted with you as though my life is worth living If only I could find the right words to say thank you for always being here I awake finding you have not returned and that many years have passed us by Though sleep is like so long ago when we were young and in love and nothing could stop us Yes I remember your smile, laugh, kiss now buried Peaceful Rest --------------------------------------------------------------------- For Skats Contest: Hard to Impress, Easy to please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/28/2013 9:48:00 AM
amazing piece of true lyrical poetry!
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:15:00 PM
Excellent piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2013 12:52:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Judy. Congrats on your awesome win. Licia
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:04:00 PM
Judy, thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:29:00 PM
Looks like a contender in the contest. Good write as usual.
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Date: 5/8/2013 1:03:00 PM
Never spoken. Reminds me of my never spokens.
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Date: 5/8/2013 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful.... Best wishes~A.O
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:53:00 AM
This is awesome, Judy. I love this form and have done one or two using this style! I didn't do the reverse though. Great job! Lovely words! Hugs!
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:11:00 AM
- A beautiful poem Judy, who was very enjoyable to read - thank you! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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