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I Remember

You 
                                                         thrill me 
                                                     with your love
                                                      never spoken 
                                             though strong and so real 
                                             I've come alive once more   
                                                I am uplifted with you 
                                          as though my life is worth living  
                                         If only I could find the right words   
                                      to say thank you for always being here 

                                        

                                      I awake finding you have not returned 
                                      and that many years have passed us by
                                           Though sleep is like so long ago 
                                          when we were young and in love  
                                                and nothing could stop us 
                                                         Yes I remember  
                                                    your smile, laugh, kiss 
                                                           now buried 
                                                             Peaceful 
                                                                Rest

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  For Skats Contest:
Hard to Impress, Easy to please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/28/2013 9:48:00 AM
amazing piece of true lyrical poetry!
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:15:00 PM
Excellent piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2013 12:52:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Judy. Congrats on your awesome win. Licia
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:04:00 PM
Judy, thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:29:00 PM
Looks like a contender in the contest. Good write as usual.
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Date: 5/8/2013 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful.... Best wishes~A.O
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:53:00 AM
This is awesome, Judy. I love this form and have done one or two using this style! I didn't do the reverse though. Great job! Lovely words! Hugs!
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Date: 5/8/2013 10:11:00 AM
- A beautiful poem Judy, who was very enjoyable to read - thank you! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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