I Release You

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(for those who grieve and find it impossible to accept the loss of their love)

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rest assured, my beloved I promise to quell my anger so your soul may rest in peace with my heart, your life I honour and finally release your soul no more cursing at the gods go in peace, my sweetness and I will meet up with you some day, on the other side till then, rest in peace, my love (for those who grieve and find it impossible to let go) AP: 2nd place 2022 Posted on March 24, 2022

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 3/26/2022 12:36:00 PM

I do not, thankfully, have this as an issue of grieving. But, as in the many passionate love songs written by Italian composers, there is that “thin line” between love/hate…molecule thin, eh? Synonymous with Passion? Bravo for this poem! Starkly spoken. Deeply felt.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2022 5:31:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sally ~

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 3/24/2022 2:52:00 PM

A touching release that I perceive as a liberation for you as for the subject of these moving lines. Blessings to you and your ‘beloved’.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2022 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Geoffrey ~